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Ok, I'm thinking some more. Never a good idea. Me thinking that is. Anyway, if Charlie is Lawrence's dad, right, and Jude's dad, could he also be CAIN's dad? Since Cain and Jude look so much alike, they gotta have the same DNA, right? Or, maybe Cain's mother and Jude's mother are one in the same? But then Cain's mother would have just given Jude away. Now I can't remember those details.

Well poop. Now I have to go back and re-read like I said before.....

This is the most bizarre.... most wonderfully bizarre story I have read in a LONG time. Thank god for someone on AFF having that elusive combination of in imagination AND writing skills!

I just started reading this story yesterday, then when I finished it, I went and read Winter Sacrifice (though seeing as it hasn't been updated in 9 months or so, I might be regretting it because now I NEED to know what happens, lol!) and they both super, super weird and super, super awesome.

ohh god i love this!! and im sooo confussed!! ?_? whats going on?!! help me!! hahah! Keep updating! this is great!!

(12) Thank god you gave an explanation for how Johnny found Cain because I was starting to get more and more suspicious with how Johnny got there and how he even knew the lab existed, which I didn't want to be as I really rather like Johnny :) And speaking of Johnny and Cain it's no secret I love them but good god they are a walking disaster aren't they and the way they talk to each other - priceless ^_^

As for Jude, don't know what to make of him at this point as of right now he just seems to be this little oddity, his story will be interesting. He does seem to have a lot of attitude for someone who's the experiment in the dark lab, course it could be less 'tude and more crazy if we go with the status quo in this town. I'm also beginning to wonder if maybe he's part of the reason people aren't dying, makes me wonder what his fate is going to be at the end of all this. I just thought of something else, are they going to tell Lawrence, that's a whole other complication.

Okay here's what I want to happen next, I want the guys to get away somewhere where they can sit down and stay put long enough to explain just what the heck is going on. No really, now I think you're just teasing me, so mean *pouts* ;) I guess I'll just have to wait and see but I'm looking forward to the next chapter regardless, hope you have a good week :)

Damn, I so hoped Stiles was good. And Johny is such a sweetheart. I'm happy that Cain is safe now but still it's a pretty confusing situation. Nana turning out to be evil and who the hell is Jude? What is this experiment thing anyway? I get it that it was intentionally written in this way to be mysterious and it worked and I've enjoyed it, but sometimes a bit more info would be nice. :) Can't wait for the next chapter, this one was very good. Cheers! :*

thanks for the update!

Wow...Johnny didn't leave, and he came back to save Cain...with the help of Stiles...

Jude is a little bit creepy and strange, but I suppose the things he went through that mentally he wouldn't be all there...but I do like him!

And Cain came back for Stiles...I hope they are able to get out of there! Especially before someone sees them...

Oh snap I can't wait for more soon! Excellent work!

Your having a hell of bash of fun here with this tale, but I am not totally sure I know what going on. I don't know what your doing, but I think your having fun doing it!

So far you have a want-be gay redneck cousin Johnny, one mysterious saved rotting zombie, who doesn't seem totally there or alive, Beautiful blond Cain the major delightful gay hero of the piece, the hotty pyromaniac Stills, who changes sides from minute to minute.

Can't wait for the finally ending, to see what it all means, for I wouldn't miss it for the world. One of your fans, G

Hahaha, as if you had a mind to lose! Cain is a riot!!

Ok, so Pappy saved Cain, but made poor Jude boy a what, freak? What happened to him? He was born in the lab, omg, using Cain's DNA??? Was Pappy trying to clone Cain? Why? How would that save the dying or dead people of the town?

I'm also a bit humored by Johnny; didn't know if I could trust him. After all, he came by just in the nick of time, out of the blue....and then he's getting all cousiny-incesty with Cain, hmmmm, can't figure him out. lol

But it seems like Stiles is definitely on Cain's side. Then why did he drag him down to the lab and drug him?

Oi vey! Now I have to wait another week. I should have waited until like Sunday to read this! ahahaha

Great chapter as always, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Hopefully I'll have time to read it now that school's back and my vacation is over. Boo, hiss. :(

wow.. i just read this in one sit down. i am so perturbed by this story it gives me the chills! AND at the same time in sooo intrigued! ive never been one to read angsty-horror-ish stories but man...ive got goosebumps all over me! its so creepy! oh my god im so disturbed by my own wish to continue reading this and for you to update!