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/cry Why does it have to be over! D: That was a fantastic story, it really was. ; _; I know it's a lot to hope for, but you should totally write some more Cain/Charlie ghostie loving. That stuff is the best. 8D Thank you for being such an awesome writer and making such a great story. ; u ;

OMG it's over????? It's over???? It's really over????? This was the story that actually got me looking forward to Mondays!!!! What will I do now???? No more Heirloom? How utterly depressing.

Ok, so the scene w/Charlie/Stiles (but not really Stiles) and Cain was interesting. So, it was really Stiles in the shower, but Charlie in the room w/Cain? So, reading your responses in your forum, it seems like Charlie will always be there with Cain, in a sense. And exorcism won't work. So basically Cain is always with two people, well, one person and one spirit, who looks like that one person. Sort of like a three-way with a ghost. Hmmmm? So does Stiles feel like he's ocmpeting w/a ghost? And Stiles can't see Charlie, right? Only Cain?

And so what happens to Jude and Johnny and Lawrence?

And so Cain's mom is also Jude's mom. I knew it! They have the same DNA, that's why they look so much alike.

Well, it's a great, great story. You should try to sell it somewhere. It kept me captivated and enthralled for months! You're an amazing author; very talented. I hope to read more from you.

thanks for such a wonderful story, and a great ending! I totally loved it...so sad to see this story end...

How sad...Peter actually physcially altered Cain and Jude's face to look more like his lover...but I'm glad that Cain told Jude that he was staying with him...and we even found out a bit about Jude and Cain's past and how Jude's mom was Cain's mom...what a horrible mother leaving her children to a madman!

Yeah, I'm glad that Stiles admitted his feelings towards Cain, and was able to apologize for being a a-hole!

Ghost goo! Hilarious...I knew something was up...especailly when Stiles' clothes were dry when Cain went to him...the smex was hot...too bad it was Charlie...Stiles seemed pretty upset...thanks again for an enjoyable read.

Thank you for a wonderful, funny, scary and outrageous story! I't been such a ride, I'm going to re-read the whole thing, probably during the weekend... absolutely one of the top three stories on here at the moment!

Ok, so I know you are on hiatus when it comes to writing but you do plan on doing a sequel for Heirloom, right? I mean, you're not planning on just leaving it there, right? Right? I hope so, cause if not, you're just plain evil. Leaving it where you did.

What about that weird tatto on Stiles' chest? o-O

Again, I love this chapter! Now I'm actually getting into the dark creppy-ish feeling this leaves me with! It's really interesting, I've never read anything like it! Keep doing what you do! You're amazing!

(13) How can we be almost done there's still so much to have happen, although we actually did get some answers this chapter :) And I liked how instead of the guys stopping and just having one long conversation to get those answers you did a good job of working the information into all the action :)

At least we finely got to find out the relationship of Peter and Charlie and as a side affect just why Nana is so cranky, I would be too if my husband was in love with someone else. Not only that but even after he died Peter still pretty much made his life about him, that could make any wife homicidal.

I actually feel a little bad for Lawrence, to find out just how much Peter has done to his family has got to be shocking. Although that's nothing compared to Cain's family problems, having your Nana repeatedly try to hurt you is going to put him in therapy (if he survives this). Speaking of family Johnny hasn't said much, being suspicious and being faced with the reality has got to leave him feeling at a loss. Right now though I would think he's a little preoccupied with having been shot, luckily Stiles' mum seems to know what to do and as a happy bonus we may get to find out something about him.^^

At this point I wouldn't be surprised if the guys just up and said screw the town and inform Johnny they were all going to his place, maybe that would get them far enough away but I'm guessing that's not exactly how it's going to work out. There's just too much that we still don't know like what is the connection between Cain and Jude. I'm wondering if they have the same mum, it would not only explain the resemblance but also why Jude's mum left him with Peter, who else but his own daughter would give him her own child. It'll be interesting to see if I'm right or not and if not what the actual story is.

Another exciting and action packed chapter, maybe the next one won't be quite as heart stopping so the boys will get a bit of a breather :) Hope everything's going well at your end and you're having a good long weekend ^_^

oh my gosh what an update...some answers!

So Jude is the son of Charlie...and that is why Avery left them go...it seems like Cain and Jude have a connection.

Stiles doesn't seem to regret killing Peter...I wonder who was the accident...Peter or his step-dad...

Nana is crazy! Well, at least Jude saved them from that encounter...

How sad, the things that Peter did to Jude and Cain...he drowned them and them resuscitated them...and what is it about Cain that he was the only one unhurt...

OH MY...what a surprise, it's Stiles mom...I hope she can help Johnny...

Mom? The Native American woman is Stiles' mom?

Well, I think this chapter cleared up a little of my confusion. Maybe not. I'll have to go back and re-read a few other chapters! lol So Cain was the only "experiment" that pretty much got out alive? And is Jude evil or good? Nana called him evil, (I think it was Nana), but he seems pretty good to me.

Ok, looking forward to next Monday already! lol

Oh yeah, and your comment about school, what a bitch. Spent an hour waiting in line at Staples! Ridiculous! And that's only the FIRST time I was there; they'll be more, b/c God forbid the teachers actually let you know ALL the supplies you'll need on the first day!! Oh no, they'll drag it out all week!