rate_review Reviews

The EXTRA finishes things off really well. Nice to see Jude finally has a sort of life, and Cain & Stiles have gotten together :) Great story- sad to see it end.

wow, what a ride! this story was amazing! And one of the most original stories I've read in a long time! AMAZING! but i really really wish for moooore! it was a little confusing, because I thought Cains pappy and charlie where lovers and his pappy was trying to bring back charlie through jude and cain, but then it's as if cain was made for charlie, to be his...nonetheless, i just looooved the story! it was wonderful! WONDERFUL! I'm hoping to go to your profile and find some more good stories, and I hope you write more in the future! btw, i still don't understand why you put incest as a warning, i was totally expecting the cousins to fuck but nope! not that i really care, because i was waiting since the first time Charlie was introduced to see cain and him to fuck. and my wish was granted!

HAHA! I'M JUST GONNA MISS THIS SO MUCH!! XD

And Johnny and Jude together! thats just so cute!! ^^
But..that'd make Jude Johnnys cousin to wouldn't it? Insest! HAHA! YUM!♥

(14) Complete, how can this be complete there's still so much left to find out about. At least it feels like there's still so much information that we need but of course I'm drawing a complete blank as to what it is we're missing. Although I am glad that there's still a little more to come, I feel like there should be at least an epilogue or something to explain just what happened to everyone. Is everyone in the town still looking for them, what about Lawrence now that he knows Charlie's in the basement and Stiles, everything he has is in that town but could he go back because Johnny and Cain can just leave but could he. Okay I admit that maybe I'm getting ahead of myself since I haven't read those extras that you've got written but this is an interesting way to end things.

At least I was pretty much right in my guess that it had to be Peter's daughter since who else would leave their child with him but still it's rather creepy that it's family members who are doing all these things to each other and not just Pappy but Nana too. Cain's right that the women are nuts but I think the men aren't that far behind, to be fair though the Avery's seem a little shall we say odd also.

And in the mist of all that Stiles and Cain just can't seem to ignore the attraction between them, it's amazing how quickly they can go from earth shattering revelations to sex. Regardless of whether it was Stiles or suppersneaky ghost it was very hot, not a bad way to end it, the ghost goo was rather giggle inducing ^_^

Another great story Clover, loved reading it and as always I can't wait for more from you :) Have a good night ^_^

This was such a fantastic story, but I'm confused about the ending. Is that it? It seems like there are so many things that are left unresolved...and frankly, I'm still a little confused. Oh well -- to the forums, it is. Thanks for the ride! It was hella fun. :)

Thats...thats......THE END?? o-O
*passes out*

Hey i'm not anaon! I'm Sana! XD
Hmm maybe it's been to long since i'ved logged in as aff is seeing me as anon..
But seriously, thats the end?? :CI thought it could have used a bit more at the end..but their free and happy now! No one died!
And it was an amazing ride! ^^
Thankyou for this whole story! :)

I'm so sad it's over, I have nothing to look forward to on sundays/mondays now! But it was a good ending! :)
Pretty much all of the questions were answered in my opinion except two
Are Stiles and Cain together now, like actually together or just screw around with each other? And what did they do about Charlie the feely-feely ghost? XD

Oh! And what are they doing now? Obviously they couldn't go back to mew mexico, (poor Cain, all his expensive hair products)
Are they making their own place, is that why the landscapers are there?