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I keep dreading reach "inheritance lost" thinking that the avery guy will screw everyone over.
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Wahhhhhhhhhhhhh, goshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhurie, it was great I didn't want it to end, I enjoyed this so much I finished it todayD; You are a wonderful and great writer, keep it up and YEAH, I LOVED THIS TOO MUCH.:D (Especially Cain's humor;D)

THIS STORY WAS JUST TOO EPIC!!!
soooooo FUCKING AWESOME! I was actually pretty freaked out when Jude jumped Nana and was clawing out her throat...not that she didn't deserve it!! And the "creepy thing in the shadowy room" turns out to be brothers with your lead character!!! It was just too crazy azz soap opera!! I was like WTF!!!
I went from laughing...suspensefilled...creeped out...then laughing again..suspicious...then back to realllly creeped out!!!...THEN TERROR-FILLED CRAZY ASS GRANMA KILLERS!! AND MURDEROUS TOWN HICKS WITH FUCKING RIFLES!!!
Your nuts!!! but I love you anyway...heehee.
soooo fuckin out of this world!

afloasdjgfkladgjal. Excuse me, my brain just had a squeegasm for this fic. Not gonna lie, I generally don't enjoy faggy characters, but oh god I love Cain he's so fantastic and hilarious and I love the way he reacted to everything. I also really enjoyed the actual plot, it was really intriguing and I spent the day I should have spent getting my car's oil changed and generally being productive reading this instead. I regret nothing.

Okay I love Jude and Johnny getting together at the end it was awsome! You just had with this story I just couldn`t put put it down or stop reading, how the hell does it work if you read on the computer any way? Oh well I enjoyed it and I look forward to read anything eles that you might have!!!

i am confused Wat the fuck happened? i dont get the story but its awesome!!!!

(15) Really Johnny, Jude of all people is he even really capable of any kind of relationship he still seems like he would be just slightly off. That being said it does seem that Jude's personality's coming out, unfortunately demanding prankster could stand for trouble or chaos depending on just how sneaky he wants to get ;) Also loved what Johnny had to say about Cain and Stiles, doesn't surprise me in the least that Stiles would be the jealous type, whether Johnny's exaggerating or not :) Normally I don't like the whole relatives kissing but for you I make an exception and to be honest that one little kiss was hardly anything to get too worked up about.^^

I've also got to remember to check that other posting you made because I need to find out if Charlie was able to follow Cain or if he's stuck where they left him. Also what Lawrence is getting himself up to.

Whatever will I read, it seems all my favourite authors are wrapping up their stories ;) Great story I loved all the guys, can't believe this is it, I think you need to start thinking about your next story ;)

I'd love to see little tid-bits of their future, I wont pressure you or anything but if your ever board and need to write something i'd totally read it! Lol the relationsips between the characters is just too funny! XD Jude your such a mean brother! blue dye?? POOR CAIN!

thanks for the adorable extra...

It was good to see that there was a happy ending for everyone...and that kiss between Jude and Johnny, was cute...I don't care if there are cousins, Jude needs someone...

Jude, I love how he can be a trickster...and I liked the whole part about Cain flirting, and how Stiles went to buy a shotgun, such a wonderful extra to the story!

Thanks.

Haha, blue dye in Cain's shampoo. Now THAT'S funny! And Cain can't tell the difference between a spatula and a fork! hahah Another definition of a spork, maybe? :)

So.....you are very, very mean Clover. I must say. Ending this story RIGHT AT A GOOD PART????? Really??? After all the reading your loyal and trustworthy fans have been through? All you leave us with is this little TEASER???? Mean, mean, mean.....lol

Maybe if all your loyal and trustworthy readers ban together and make a little petition to continue with this last EXTRA chapter......hmmmmm?