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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start here! I like how you began it all, with the mysterious guy, the mean (but hot sounding) cousin, and the crazy but adorable Nana! Can't wait for more!
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this is a great start...Cant wait for the next chapter
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is one of the best new stories I've read recently! It's fantastic! The descriptions are vivid, the dialogue flows really well and the humor! This Cain is some character; from his Prada heels to his manicured hands; he's hysterical!
I CANNOT WAIT to read more!!!!!!
I CANNOT WAIT to read more!!!!!!
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Niiiiceee maaaan! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just went into your profile b/c your name sounded so familiar, and I realized you had written Pride. That's a great story, so far. You started it back in February; are you going to continue with it? I hope so; it's really good so far!
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, now I can't wait to find out what Pappy's secret in the basement is!! Sounds like quite a few interesting characters will spice things up for Cain. Great story- Update soon please!!
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness!! haha i'm out in far west Texas right now and I can't tell you how happy i was to read this :) Bring it on!!! and i love the description of the grandparents. love it!!