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OH lordly lord.. God I hope things work out for Cain and whatever it is he just inherited!! hopefully it's not some ghost lol that'd suck. Love the story though!!

Ok, Cain is fucking hysterical! OMG - "If I weren't flaming already, that image would have brought me right over the edge." Hysterical!!!! And when he asked Stiles which team he was on, the breeders or the packers? OMG, I almost fell off my stool!!!! But, on to more serious things:

Who was in the basement licking Cain's thumb? Kinda creepy! And what' w/Johnny; I didn't take him to be gay....calling his cousin eye candy? Hmmmm

I'm guessing w/Stiles showing some hostility towards Cain, that Pappy left something to Cain that Stiles wants; maybe the antique shop?

I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!! This is turning out to be one of my top 3 favorites on this site!!!!

You are such an amusing author; I think I'll start reading your other stuff (besides the Pride story). I always wanted to read about Oliver....

Anyway, great job! Happy Memorial Day!

Intriguing start. Nice characterisation, novel scenario, fascinating location, and a mystery... I'm definitely keen to see where you're taking this. 'Purr

oh...this story looked interesting, and now I'm hooked...

I wonder why Stiles was so malicious towards Cain, and I wonder why he meant "why he chose you"; I wonder if Stiles is referring to Pappy...maybe it has to do with something in the basement...

Johnny is wierd, and kindof creepy, but he does bring in comic relief...I wonder if he just likes to tease Cain...

Ooh, talk about creepy.. I know I definitely wouldn't be sleeping on my own in the basement after that XP
But I guess to make it an interesting story, Cain will just have to lump it *snickers*. His cousin seems to be ready to protect him anyway :) Update again soon!!!

i like the story
more plwase :)

Lovely first chapter. I am cooking forward to more.

okay, I saw the summary and was like "eh might be cool" and now I really really want to read more. You got my attention lovely author, Hope you update soon! I'll have my eye out for this story :D

Loving the beginning of this, definitely some characters in this town :) And Pappy sounds like an interesting guy, I wonder what he saw in Cain that no one else did. Such a good start, can't wait for more ^_^

Great start! Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com