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WTF? hahah. that pastor part was hilarious....
something supernatural is definitely happening. but i gots no clue. thats got me bugged, cause supernatural sleuthing is all about i read...
i guessing demon of some kind..
“He called me a ‘cocky little cunt’. What the hell is a cocky cunt anyway, a hermaphrodite, or a rooster-shaped cootchie or…? What?” HAHAHAH.
OH. you scared me with this part. “Cain…” Johnny’s voice went low with a sudden urgency. It sounded farther away than I expected… “Cain, get up. Now.”
Not just far away, he sounded like he was across the room. My body went stiff and the hand on my back halted. My eyes widened, staring into the blue checkerboard print of the pillowcase as I concentrated on the hand. “Johnny… That’s you touching me, right?”
“No, Cain…” An edge of fear seeped into Johnny’s faraway voice. “It’s not.”
looking forward to more. youve totally got me intrigued....
update quickly, alrighty. at least we know not only cain can see the thing, whatever it is.... and yea, whys it all loveydovey touchy feely with cain?

ooh it gets interesting

wow awesome ending "no it's not" lol i love it hope you up date soon.

I love slow moving romance stories with intrigue.

Wow, this story is really intriguing. You've developed this sense of suspense/mystery really well and I can't wait for more.

This chapter succeeded in scaring my pants off. Spooky! When I was around 12 years old. I let my arm dangle off the bed one night and I was on one finger bitten by either a mouse or a rat. So that scene really rings a bell for me. This story is a very compelling mystery. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

(2) Sexy hicks and cousins, oh god is this another threesome gone awry because I admit that I just figured out who you are and I can still remember the whole Oliver, Luc, Ailill debacle.^^ And speaking of figuring out who you are, it's good to see another story from you hun *hugs* I'm so looking forward to this :)

I like that little bit of mystery thrown in, is it the dog (what i first thought) or something else entirely, plus Stiles obviously knows more than we do so I can't wait to find out what's going on. And then there's Johnny, I don't know what to make of him, I wanted to dislike him but I find myself at this point more exasperated than anything but it's early it could still go either way ;) I will eagerly what for an update ^_^

By the way I know this is a pain but if you respond to any of my reviews could you maybe send me an email (chat/something ;) pretty please because I can't actually see the link you gave unless I have an account :( I'd really appreciate it but either way I'm looking forward to this :)

Alright... the Stile whatever his name is .. creepy for some reason. But anywaaaayyyy!! This chapter cracked me up! His that hot that even his cousin is after his.. butt. Can;t wait for the next chapter!

I'm intrigued by this story. Cain seems like a neurotic, obsessive fool, but vaguely perceptive enough to realise something is not right about this situation. I like the mysterious layers of Stiles. Deceptively cordial perhaps? And strange licking apparitions... Curious to see where you take this :)

I love your stories!