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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(4) I loved how Nana just automatically went into Grandma Mode right into a lecture about fighting, it's like they never stopped being twelve year old boys to her.^^ I wonder if she knows or is just suspicious of what's going on in the basement (i wouldn't mind knowing what's going on in the basement myself).
Who knew someone as big as Johnny could move so fast, although the fact that the big burly guy was that scared leaves me feeling a little concerned - along with the chapter title 0.0 So Johnny knows something is going on but does he actually know what or even anything about this heir thing, since he's always disregarded the lines does that mean he may be more susceptible to what's going on. So many questions.
You know I was starting to think that the lines actually didn't mean anything and Pappy just did that to keep everyone out of his stuff, this chapter definitively dispelled that. Considering all the creepy stuff going on why in the world would Stiles want to be heir... although I suppose he's never actually said that he wants to be heir he just seems upset that Cain is. As for Cain he should learn to trust his instincts especially in this house, if it doesn't feel right, don't go into the basement with it!
Much too short but suitably creepy and the mystery just keeps getting better - kind of loving this ^_^ I like that there's more to it than just all the boys trying to sleep with each other (not that there's necessarily anything wrong with that ;) but it's always nice when there's more to it than just hot boysex :) Really great chapter, looking forward to more ^_^
Who knew someone as big as Johnny could move so fast, although the fact that the big burly guy was that scared leaves me feeling a little concerned - along with the chapter title 0.0 So Johnny knows something is going on but does he actually know what or even anything about this heir thing, since he's always disregarded the lines does that mean he may be more susceptible to what's going on. So many questions.
You know I was starting to think that the lines actually didn't mean anything and Pappy just did that to keep everyone out of his stuff, this chapter definitively dispelled that. Considering all the creepy stuff going on why in the world would Stiles want to be heir... although I suppose he's never actually said that he wants to be heir he just seems upset that Cain is. As for Cain he should learn to trust his instincts especially in this house, if it doesn't feel right, don't go into the basement with it!
Much too short but suitably creepy and the mystery just keeps getting better - kind of loving this ^_^ I like that there's more to it than just all the boys trying to sleep with each other (not that there's necessarily anything wrong with that ;) but it's always nice when there's more to it than just hot boysex :) Really great chapter, looking forward to more ^_^
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
basements are scary!
lol. random.
this is getting so good.
is it a ghost? so very mysterious. hot too in a strange way.
heir to what?
those circle things... are they for protection? or to keep evil in?
looking forward to more.
lol. random.
this is getting so good.
is it a ghost? so very mysterious. hot too in a strange way.
heir to what?
those circle things... are they for protection? or to keep evil in?
looking forward to more.
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very intense!
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ewwww my review didn't show up. just wanted to say awesome chapters! he should go into the basement more often ;)
you know...at least if he has sex, no stds!
you know...at least if he has sex, no stds!
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you for updating so fast! :DD I'm addicted to this story already!
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God!!!! I have to wait ANOTHER LOOOONNNNGGGGG week until there's an update???????? I don't know if I can wait that long!!!!
What the FUCK keeps touching Cain? And why did it have Stiles' voice? And what secrets was his grandfather keeping? And how the HELL can he stay out of the basement if he's supposed to sleep down there?????
Inquiring minds (mine, dammit!) want to know!!!!
But...on to the comical aspect of this most awesome story: Cain is a fucking hoot! Waiting for some stud to fuck the shit out of him! And Stiles says when hell freezes over! Too funny!!!!
I'm so in love with this freaking story; I CANNOT WAIT ONE MORE SECOND for an update! But I guess I'll have to....
What the FUCK keeps touching Cain? And why did it have Stiles' voice? And what secrets was his grandfather keeping? And how the HELL can he stay out of the basement if he's supposed to sleep down there?????
Inquiring minds (mine, dammit!) want to know!!!!
But...on to the comical aspect of this most awesome story: Cain is a fucking hoot! Waiting for some stud to fuck the shit out of him! And Stiles says when hell freezes over! Too funny!!!!
I'm so in love with this freaking story; I CANNOT WAIT ONE MORE SECOND for an update! But I guess I'll have to....
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg it's your birthday soon?? Happy almost birthday!! :D
Ahh I remember my 16th¢¾ Uh YEAH, I don't trust Nana as far as I could throw her...course she is a little old lady so I could probably throw her pretty far but SO not the point!
I'm such a wuss at horror and things hiding behind the bed or in the closet or OMG WHEN YOUR IN THE BATHTUB AND IT'S BEHIND THE CURTAIN!!! TAT WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! SCARY!!
Ahh I remember my 16th¢¾ Uh YEAH, I don't trust Nana as far as I could throw her...course she is a little old lady so I could probably throw her pretty far but SO not the point!
I'm such a wuss at horror and things hiding behind the bed or in the closet or OMG WHEN YOUR IN THE BATHTUB AND IT'S BEHIND THE CURTAIN!!! TAT WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! SCARY!!
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Been reading and enjoying the hell out of your stories the last few days. This one is really different but still has the the chlover touch to it that I've recently come to love. I absolutely adore all the sarcasm! Even tho your main characters are male, I find them extremely relatable(Im a girl) lol They all have a backbone that's hard not to fall for and definitely not your typical Pansy boy. I hope you update soon. This whole supernatural thing going on has me hooked. Not to mention throwing in a hottie like Stiles. Who can resist a guy that plays that hard to get!? XD makes the "getting" all the more fun! Here's to hearing more from you soon. *clinks glass*
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what kind of secrets Peter was hiding...and what is the key to excatly....and the mystery Stiles fooled Cain into going downstairs...I wonder what Stiles know and what he isn't saying...and Johnny was really freaked out, he has never been serious until that point...thanks for the update
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love love love this! Such a long time since I found a good story to read! Love it! :D