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for Heirloom

by PyTerato

person Vintcient
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is simply amazing. I haven't read something this good or thought out in a long time. The plot is engrossing to say the least and I almost cried when I mindlessly read through the chapters and couldn't get past 7.:D I CANNOT wait for more!!!
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey Clover! Hope your b-day was a happy one! Yay, we both have socks older than you are! hahaha

OMG, Cain is a hoot! "The first man in this town to touch me that actully exists"! Too funny! And omg, "...dance, chat, take pottery classes w/Demi Moore?" Jesus Christ! I fell off my stool laughing!

Ok, so old gramps is into dead people. And live people. Co-existing together? He is, was, pretty creepy. How did he figure he could get dead people "back"? And was that HIM molesting Cain? Ewwwww! And wait! Stiles was in love with gramps?????? Double ewwwwwww!!!!!

Hey, why don't you try to get your wireless set up BEFORE you move in your new place in two weeks? Is that even possible? So us readers (ok, me), don't have to wait for an update to this most awesomely hilarious and creepy story! lol

Anyway, great chapter, as usual. Now my countdown begins until next Monday!!!!!
person Wynja
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! It's both funny and scary at the same time... have no bloody idea what to expect, but I'm sure I'll enjoy the ride.. .;)
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool story so far. i cant wait to read more. please update soon.
person Kip
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant! More! More! In case that hasn't been sufficient encouragement, this is really excellent gripping writing, and as soon as the next chapter is posted I will review some more. In the meantime, I thought that your characterisation was consistent, Cain's attitude is perfect, and the mysterious 'groper' is magnificently sinister. I'd like to know a bit more about Styles - but no doubt you have plans to reveal that in forthcoming chapters? Thanks for producing something that is so fresh and so marvellously entertaining! 'Purr
person Aleks
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM

Wow this story is exciting
gripping, thrilling, enthralling, fascinating, heart-stopping and....

sexy !
person Aleks
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM

Just wanted to ad:

Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kylee123
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Te story is scary and hilarious at the same time. The family has its own ghost and it can change its appearance to impersonate someone else. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I had a good laugh over Cain's encounter with the poor pastor. i think he has finally met his match with this family ghost. Good writing. The opening of this story was absolutely fabulous as well.
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow so creepy, very unique story and I want more!!!
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your writing style and character development is amazing! You honestly had my heart skip a beat at that cliffy in chapter 3. Then the goosebumps carried over to chapter 4.