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So. During the part where Cecilia's feelings where revealed, I was laughing so hard in shock and disbelief that no sound was coming out. Also, my mouth was wide open, and I think my eyes were pretty big, too. xD And, as Amanda said, it would explain so much.

Hm. I should be off to bed as well, although I'm not tired yet. (Of course, as soon as I think and type that, I have to stifle a yawn. >3>;;)

Ah, there it is! THE TRUTH! XD I always wonder about the major bitch is stories and think about if she really is just pulling a I-like-you-but-I'm-gonna-tease-you-and-make-fun-of-you-so-you-don't-realize-I-like-you instead of admitting she's in luuuuuv. I figured it out once Cecelia brought up Saige's "cockiness" and then she rambled on about Saige's schedule (er, creeper) and how good she was at stuff. I definitely don't think Cecelia will take Amanda's place at all, even if tragedy hit and split the current lovers apart, just because Cecelia, like Saige said, hurt her too much. I really liked that twist though! :) It was awesome.

ps - if you find the time to make that deliciousness, I'd love to read it. :)

Yes, she finally did it! I'm so happy! So there's enough room for me in Melinda's house, yes? ;) I was thinking about what Saige said to Amanda about not sleeping over at Melinda's house, but the more I think about how that could turn out... with Saige, Amanda, and Melinda... the more I feel I need to shower. XD Anyway, bring on the plot twists! :D

XDDD That end part really made me laugh. And I'm glad that Saige decided to move in with Melinda. Although, now I'm starting to worry for her mother. But, I have to agree that she's basically causing herself harm since she's not leaving although she could.

Aww, now that's what I wanted to see! :D Loved the touching and kissing and all that jazz. It was wonderful, lady. :) Now I wonder what Amanda will say to Melinda's proposal. I mean, she could be happy, but she could be upset, too, that Saige would go stay with Melinda over her. But if she does freak out, I think she has to consider the fact that Saige just getting out of that crazy household would be so much healthier that it doesn't matter WHO she goes with, just that she does leave. Personally, though, I think that Amanda will encourage Saige to go... unless you have some maniacal twist in the plot or something. ;P Also, that was a love poem that Amanda read/wrote. I can now see where the title comes from. ;)

Well.

That was certainly one big cliffhanger, wasn't it? I don't even get to find out the reaction to that admission this chapter. >: I hope both Saige and Amanda win their respective competitions. *nods* ...Will I also find that out next chapter? 8D Hm, hm hm?

Man. Now I wanna watch Matilda again. *groans*

Sorry about not reviewing last chapter. I couldn't think of anything to say. >3< That's not to say that it was a bad chapter, though, 'cause it wasn't. And boy do I know the feeling of not having any motivation. We seem to be best buds at the moment. *frowns* But, if it gets too hard to keep writing, feel free to take a break for however long you see fit. I would miss reading your stuff if you did that, but I'd be waiting patiently for you to continue when you would feel up to it as well. :>

This chapter was good, though. I got a good laugh out of picturing Cecilia's expression when Melinda made the announcement.

XD You got me there! Sister incest -- sincest? -- between the Halliwells is magnificent, however. ;P And I think some Melinda/Saige lovin' would be delightful as well... but that's just me! :) Anyway, right now, I think that Amanda/Saige is just adorable enough to satisfy my pairing-craving. I still want more hurt/comfort between those girls! :D Let Amanda caress those poor wounds of Saige's, lady! Hehe. I'm looking forward to if Saige will let Melinda take her in. I want Melinda to at least do something about the abuse in Saige's household. That's just horrible. And, hun, you are doing just fine! Don't rush your writing process and just let it come when you feel it. You'll always have someone that'll read your stuff. :)

um, ps - can Melinda be my principal and/or cousin, please? :)

Yeah, her dad sure helps a lot of businesses! ...that damn asshole. The ending scene was very touching (oh, how punny ;)) with Saige and Amanda. I always love stories that have that hurt/comfort scene where one character is injured and the other character, usually duh lovuh, kisses them and caresses the wound and such. Favorite part, yessss.

ps - I'm a creeper and read what ikkichi said, and I totally agree and think the same about the Matilda comparison! It would be lovely to have Melinda take care of Saige, but I think Saige might get a little curious (wink wink) with her cousin... Though I do not blame her because Melinda sounds like a goddess, HOWEVER they are cousins so it's... awkward. ;)

Man, I was laughing when Amanda was telling Saige about her eyes. But, then that good mood was ruined by what her dad did. However, then my hopes and happiness seemed to skyrocket when I had the thought that maybe Melinda would adopt Saige or something. Like in Matilda. (*totally wants to watch that movie now*) It'd be awesome, a bit awkward, and a lot better for Saige if it happened. Although, that's just my wishes and hopes talking. So I'll just have to wait and see about what's going to happen in the future.