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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
XD Priceless ending! I laughed o' loud, hehe. My my my, not her biological father, eh? Who is, pray tell? It's probably Jack Dawson or something if her mom made it to Paris and was a one-legged hooker! (Excuse that. Just watched Titanic...) Anyway... SEX ON THE FLOOR?! :D
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GASP. Family drama and secrets are revealed! But, at least Saige can now officially be adopted by Mel. That right there made me grin like an idiot, and hopefully Saige will choose to get adopted--although, I can't see a reason why she wouldn't want to be, especially since it's Mel. Also, the very last line made me laugh.
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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahaha! I love the ending!! ^_^ This explains so much, really; I love it! I can't wait for more, good job Saige, keep up the great work! ^^b
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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, my dear! :) Long and well-written, yes! They sure are having nice amounts of sex now, aren't they? Hehe, good for them. ^_^ I doubt Amanda will ever want Cecelia to sit with them, and I don't blame her at all for feeling that way. I don't think, though, Saige will allow the girl to be by herself at lunch much longer... so I'll have to see how that turns out. Keep it up!
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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was an exciting chapter to read at about seven in the morning. Woke me up quite nicely with the restrained laughter of some parts and the worry in others. But, thankfully, Saige's father can't hurt her anymore. Practically sighed in relief when I read that the police were there. And now onto the next chapter! xD
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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mm. That was a simply wonderful chapter. I chuckled a little when I said, "Well, haven't seen her in what seems like forever," when I saw Cecilia's name mentioned. Sadly, I'd kind of forgotten about...well, practically everyone besides Saige, Amanda, Mel, and Saige's father. *shot*
Anyway, it's cool that both Saige and Amanda got first place in their competitions, though. *nods* And, as always, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Anyway, it's cool that both Saige and Amanda got first place in their competitions, though. *nods* And, as always, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's short T.T. However oh so sweet, there isn't a much better ending to that sorta situation. I'm glad it all came out pretty well, considering the past. Still it was great, really great quality ^^. Keep it up Saige, we want more! ^^b
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July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh-ho-ho, possession! I feel like I'm reading a Charmed story! XD That man must be pretty good, even drunk, to attack those ladies the way he did. I must say, I got pretty nervous when he hurt Melinda. :O was my face. I'm sorry I was too tired to read it last night... XD Can't wait for more.
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July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh well... I've just read everything in a row, I thought you'd end it in chapter 22 before reading your A.N. This story is very touching, you got me crying with that love declaration, really, I'm not kidding, it's beautiful. I can't wait to read more, please update soon. Mags :)
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as usual! I loved the poem, make sure you tell your friend it was good. I'm pretty stoaked they're finally out in the open with eachother.