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for Desert Wind

by Supporttherainbow

schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's nice to see you back. This was a nice preview into the lives of the princes and how the dynamic between them works. When I saw you updated I was so excited that I didn't get any work done. I was actually going to offer to beta for you but then I saw you had Ashley and when I saw that you needed one I got excited all over again. So I would really like to beta for you, I've read all your stories, unless you've written one lately that I don't know about, and love them all- especially Daniel and Max- so that offer would extend to all your stories. I am an English major in university and I do beta for blueghostghost and a few other people if that helps. I'd really love to beta for you too so if you're interested just email me at: writeaddict7@gmail.com
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I tried to savor that chapter since I haven't gotten one for this story in so long, and I still breezed threw that far to quickly lol. I enjoyed the cute little bonding scene we had going on in this chapter :) And I'm looking forward to more! And I would volunteer to be your beta for this amazing story :D but I don't know what program your type in and I only have microsoft works on mine and I'm trying not to load anything more into my poor over loaded computer :P So I don't know if I would be of any use to you. But I wish you luck is not only finding a beta but in frever beating the all dreaded writers block ;)
person Chibko
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was excited to see an update and this chapter did not disappoint. I love how Alex and Husam share a close moment in the bathroom and then in bed. :3 I think they're cute around each other and I wonder if the twins picked up on whatever is developing between Alex and Husam. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person Scrobette
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A new chapter! I simply screamed in delight (much to the dismay of my neighbors). I love this story and I'm very glad you have gotten over your writer's block... It must be hell to be so talented and then made to suffer so. *gives tea, cookies and a hug* Best wishes and can't wait for the next chapter
person Raven
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay ur alive! i had almost given up hope that one of my favorite storys would be contined. i look forward to what you going to write. i lk the way your latest chapter is going. cant wait for more again soo glad to see your safe
person poppyhigh
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really glad to read new chapter of this story ^^ A bit long period to see the update. Now Alex and Husam will be something and hope they will get some process between each other. But for big brother, still no idea what will happen between him and Alex. So hope to read new one in the near future. Supporting you.
person grugster
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is AWESOME, GREAT, AMAZING.... I absolutely love it. Please update soon.
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, COME BACK!!!!!
person Alice
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I love this story!
person Will Treaty
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I hope you are ok and not sick or that anything bad has happened to you!!! I noticed you haven't updated this particular story since 01/27/2011 and wish you could find time to get back to writing it. Take care and hope you are well.