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I like this chapter the most. The 'talks' were my favorite parts! It cleared up so many things! Oh man I love those part. The lemon was good too.

Damn I would beta but I have no pc and my english is horrible. Man I really love this story too. Take your time; as long as you don't can it.

I can't wait for the next chapter. <3

Glad to see you back! Also, great chapter. Good to see Alex has at least a little sway in how things go. :)

I just went to your FP profile to see if there were some news of you... And then... An AFF update ! :))
Welcome back ! And thanks for sharing...
He really need to be more daring... ^^

I'm so happy this story is back! It's one of my favorite Original Stories on AFF.net. English is my first language so if you'd like I wouldn't mind being your beta.

OMFG!!!! I don't believe it!!!!! I must have jumped up and down for joy a bunch of times when I saw this story up!!!! Luckily no one was around to mock me! :)

Thank God you're back!!!!!! I was just about to send you another annoying poke, poke, b/c I have never forgotten this amazing story! And kudos to Ashley too; she's doing a great job! I don't know what it looked like when you sent it to her, but it looks awesome now! :) If you want, I can proof the chapter if she's not available. My email is LisaT25@msn.com if you're interested. I didn't realize you're not a native English speaker. The story is impeccable as far as I can tell. :)

Anyway...back to the chapter: It's so cute to see Alex actually developing feelings for all his husbands! And I am sure they have similar feelings of fondness and care for Alex. The way Asad goes out of his way to get Alex to study and how he supplies him with books definitely shows he cares for Alex. Also, the way Sadin barged in on Alex just to tell him about Husan just proves that Alex is becoming a valuable member of the family.

Awesome chapter! I can't wait for more; I'm so, so glad you're back Udunie! :)

Heya

Tried to add myself to your mailing list. Didn't work, maybe you can add me because this is amazing and I can't always check updates because I fly for a living and am now always in reach of internet. I would offer to beta your stuff but seeing as I'm off in between you probably wouldn't want to wait 2-3 days for me to get back to you.

My e-mail address is: Jet_fire@hotmail.com´. By the way this story is AMAZING if I haven't reviewed by now, I am a very awful person, so just to let you know I love this and hope you update soon.

Huggins
Aduial

*hoots* It's great to see an update!!!! I understand the writer's block woes only too well!!! Its great to see an update that has the same level of tension and detail as the other chapters!!!! If you need help I can proof for you. Anything to make your load less heavy! Check my profile if u want: eien_no_ren.

I've waited for so long for an update! Please keep it frequent! *coughwhenaretheygonnadoit*cough*