rate_review Reviews

You have no idea how stoked I was to see this update! This story is definitely among my favorites on this site. =)
I liked seeing a softer side of Husam in this chapter. It's also nice to see Alex and Husam getting along. However, I'm really curious about how Asad is actually feeling about Alex. If he'll ever like Alex the way Husam and the twins do.
Definitely looking forward to the next update! Good luck!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY
*wildhoppingincluded*
You just made somebody very happy here *^_____^*
Love your stories- I´ve always watched out for an update, even worried something might have happened to you... now I´m really relieved its just writers block and you´ll even continue writing*dumdidum*
And such a sweet chappy^^ I just knew he´d care for all of them (and they would for him). It was like candy reading about Hussams behaviour, even cuddling XD And he convinced him to take at least one pill *yay*^^
I just hope you´ll soon find a beta, I understand you pretty well since I´m no native speaker too and its really hard writing a story in another language- you´re doing a great job btw, I really like your style and your stories are great=)
Thank you for updating and sharing your stories with us^^
Best wishes
Chi

yay...updated...i almost thought u were kidnaped by alliens....hehehe just kidding, i love the updated...they are getting closer and closer...
and i don't mind reading your unbeta story. please updated soon if u still can't find beta how about suggest the reader to make u a note if u write something wrong?
keep it up undunie,,,will wait your next updated...

I just want to say I'm glad you updated after so long. xD I missed this story.

Oh and if you need a betareader please go ahead and email me. I wouldn't mind betaing your story if you can't find anyone else.

Haha, forgot my email.

It's kumiko_chan@hotmail.com if you decide on me to beta your story. :)

I was really excited to see the new update of this story and read the last few chapters over again to remind myself what was going on in this story. I liked to new chapter a lot!

So happy you updated!! I love this story and if you need someone to proof read your work than i'll do it. just email me the chapters at krystaldumas@yahoo.com

This is an awesome story so far, normally I'd say get on with the sex already but since it's more about family dynamics it's kind of more complicated. When the man who saved Alex's life claimed that he'd be the one to bring change, I was almost hoping for mpreg; but then again theres that stupid law about the barren wife and how they must go through the year trial. I'm thinking that's going to be so ebolished. But wait a minute didn't he say something about if the first wife proves to be barren.... I'm just thinking outside the box, could they legally have two wives then? I know that sounds kind of heavy realistic, but hey I stilll in my heart of hearts I'm thinking Aladinish thoughts. I do love magic, oh well.

I finally found this story again; glad you didn't can it! But I have to read it all over again though -_-

I love this story, the characters are wonderful even when they are cranky.