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for Desert Wind

by Supporttherainbow

person kikib77
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh boy! hope everything turns out okay.
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I second that question, he's what?God married to four male princes?
Yummy.
person kitty08
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow great start you got me curiouse! I would love to read more!! please update soon!!
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh that is just an evil place to end! I do hope you plan on updating very soon! I like your story so far, you have sucked me in.
person GellyBelly
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ohhh daaayuuumm! They better be hot! lol
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this story is so amusing! He's married to what, those thugs who beat him up? Too funny!

Excellent story; thanks for the quick update! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great start to the story! It's extremely original; I've never read anything like it on here! There were a few missed letters (stared instead of started), but no big deal. The writing is interesting, the descriptions were great! I can't wait to read what happens next to poor Alex!
person KageKiri
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh noes!! What's happening??
I wonder what the cweremony was, and I hope that he's okay :(
I'm liking this so far! More please :)
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start here, I can't wait to see what else you have planned!
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very compelling beginning and I hope you continue with it very very soon because I want to figure out what happens to him!