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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw. And just when we were getting to the good part. I can't wait to see more of those brothers. I wish your chapters were longer; I feel like I just get a tiny little taste each time. It's like stopping after only one potato chip. Totally depressing.
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! Poor Alex! He has to be beaten up, kidnapped, basically and now humilliated in front of the whole African village! hahah Poor kid! I can't wait to read about what the princes have to say about his outfit! That should be hysterical!
Oh, one typo: the shirt w/the shoulders too strait should be straight.
Oh, one typo: the shirt w/the shoulders too strait should be straight.
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great idea. Im wowed by the idea of marrying four princes. Is that poor chap really gonna sleep with all of em? o.o
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like your fiction so much. It's interesting story which a boy who married for four brothers and very interesting Law for this country...Waiting to reach more soon...Supporting you!!!
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Boy Bride,[he's up to his ass in grooms], sorry badass pun! Sorry couldn't resist it... I am just that way. Neat Story can't wait to read more! G
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lawdy, lawdy, lawdy!! It just keeps getting better!! Hope Alex isn't made to dance. That would be friggin hilarious!
Keep the story coming.
Keep the story coming.
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, even though accidental marriage is done a lot, this one manages to be very different! I'm excited for the rest I love multiple partner pairings lol! please update soon!
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really feel she's being unnecessarily rude to him. : / I don't get it... they didn't lock the doors or have it roped off. I really don't see how this is a fair for him at all! at any rate, i feel for him and I'd love to make him a fake passport and spirit him away from there :)
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope that he puts up a little more of a fight cause really he is being way to docile and I would really like to see him show a little more back bone but that is just me. Thank you for a great chapter and I look forward to more.
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so original! I like it very much. The chapters could be a bit longer, I feel they're kind of short. This is a really interesting story, please update soon!