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by Supporttherainbow

schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that got me hot and bothered. Lolz Poor Alex...the first sexual experience had to come with four brothers looking at him in his most distressed position. I just wondered who would Alex end up in the end. I'm thinking that it might be Asad since he stayed and comfort him after.
person kylee123
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love how the story is progressing. I can just feel Alex's embarassment. I imagine that if the brothers did not view him sexually before, they won't be able to help it now that they have seen him under the effects of the aphrodisiac. Love the story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person reid
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was a great start, and i'm looking forward to reading more you've created some characters that seem to have a real amount of depth to them.
waiting 4 an update
S.
person tmelange
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really do wonder where this story is going, lol. It's funny and fascinating at the same time. Bravo!
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, did someone drug the chocolates, knowing Alex would eat them?

I had to laugh that the twins would have gone to Yale! That's my neck of the woods! They must be EXTREMELY SMART!!!!

So, poor Alex had to sleep w/4 hunky Arabian men, wow, what a travesty! lol

I'm so glad you updated and I can't wait for the next update; I LOVE this story!!!!
person HannaFO
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh poison? Or something better XD Can't wait for the next chapter :)
person DekorxAo
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what a horrible cliff hanger! T_T I love this story so much! I hope you update soon, because it's killing me not being able to read more! D:
person kylee123
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! This chapter was so good! I need more. I am so jealous of Alex. I need four royal husbands too (in the same bed)! I wonder who drugged the chocolates? Alex really does need four husbands to protect him.
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. I.. This.. a;lksdjf... I love it! There are no words to describe how awesome these first five chapters are. I hope you update this story soon!
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“Unfortunately biology books were not too common when our laws were made, we can only prove that you are infertile if we spend every night for a year in the same bed with you.” He said, clearly not happy about it.

“Wh…” His gaze unintentionally landed on the aggressive bastard, making him shudder. To spend a year with the guy who beat him up? In the same bed?

“No! I… please, can’t I go to jail instead?”

Just gotta say, these are the best lines eva.....! Your story is so funny and awesome