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for Desert Wind

by Supporttherainbow

person Koejii
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story so far. It has to be one of my favourites, along with Daniel and Max, on this entire site. Can't wait for more! I really can't!
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omh i love this story... think its hilarious in how he just wandered into this huge situation and think its brilliant in how u have the characters react to each other.
do u have a mailing list for updates? if u do i would love to be added to it. my email is endless_creativity@hotmail.com
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Alex is so cute; putting his foot in his mouth! "I was with the twins all day. God, my ass is sore!" haha

"They taught me how to ride!" He's too funny; I almost fell off my stool! lol

So, I thought they're all in the parade. Why is only Asad taking him?
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God, that was just too funny, "God my ass is sore!"lol
I just adored this chapter, kinda reminded me a bit of my day, but instread of horses it was with kids (my fussy baby cousins lol) Alex is too cute for his own good! I can't wait for the next chapter, till then! ~Passing Reader
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! this is an interesting story. the person who poisoned him: was it of the former bride's family or akrab (did i spell that right)? can't wait for more! ^^
ASOTA
person dutsada
schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot and crazy at the same time... aphrodisiac as a present.. poor boy had to experience so much in such a short time.
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A pleasure to read.
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, I'm loving where this story is heading! Looking forward to the sexy times to come~
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! Who would want Alex dead and who would have access to this drug? Well, I know everyone there in the "kingdom" wanted to hurt Alex, but to kill him? Maybe the former bride's family? Hmmm. Also, I was thinking, during Alex's humiliation, if it was an aphrodesiac (or however it's spelled) for the prostate, why didn't they do anything with his prostate? I was just curious.

Anyway, awesome story! I love your stories! They're so well-written and they keep me coming back for more!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and btw: thank you so much for updating! This is one of my favorites on here!
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work here, loved it!!!