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for Desert Wind

by Supporttherainbow

schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I knew he'd be the first to break! Well, sorta... But seriously, I knew he'd like it the most... I hope they hook up. Anyway, love it!
person kylee123
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Three husbansd down and one to go! I love the idea of Alex with Husam. The idea of Alex with the twins makes steam come out of my ears. I just love it. I wonder if Asad will ever come around to making a move? The story is going great. I can't wait to read more.
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, now Alex has been kissed by three guys! He should be lucky their all not forcing him to consummate the marriage! lol Altho now, with his confustion, I don't think he'd mind too much! Well at least Husam made Alex feel better about the twins using him. I wasn't thinking they used him at all....
person lucmaria
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
updated pleaseee.......
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this cant wait fo next chapter
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG love your story please put me on the update list :)))))
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great! I see, first step to smut developement, that's the right direction! Rock on! Cheers! :*
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Omg, Alex cracks me up! Alex could practically hear his jaw drop, landing on the marble with a loud thud! omg, too funny! And.....well, incest is not something to fool around with. OMG, pun intended????? I was cracking up!!! And he was amazed by the fact that he wasn't grossed out!!!!

So, the twins know he saw them and how did they figure out he wasn't disgusted?

Anyway, awesome chapter, can't wait to find out how he feels in the a.m. w/o any booze!!!! lol
person kylee123
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! All my favorite things in one chapter. Twincest and more. I am glad that Alex is opening up to the twins. This could turn out to be a very happy marriage indeed. Alex is so lucky to have four husbands! I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know what to think when I saw it with a moresome warning but I love it so far and I can't wait for more!