rate_review Reviews

The last chapter was well done !
I like this story but I think a little bit of smex will be good XD
And I hope you're going to have time to update "The mute..." Like this story too !^^

Oh Udunie, I hope you're better now. If it makes you feel any better, the chapter was amazing! I really love the banter between the twins. And Alex getting all put off and angry for them suggesting a three-way so the twins can continue to be together, was just hysterical!

I can't wait for the next chapter; I wonder why that idiot was hurting Sadin?

Oh, and I meant to add this in my review, but of course I forgot! I thought it ironic that Alex's last name is Harris and the boy he had a crush on in high school's last name is Harrison. Pretty similiar!

Thank you for the up date. I felt this chapter went very well. I really enjoy this story and look forward to reading more, (hopefully with some hot sex XD).

I NEED Desert Wind! I can't wait anymore! It's been to long! I can't wait anymore! I want an update! :D


Pleeaaasssseeeee

ok when I first read the summary for this story I decided to skip it as it was sure to be one of those run of the mill PWP smut stories that get old really fast, but then I thought; what the hell if it's bad I'll just stop reading it, and I wasn't too hopeful after the first two chapters but even then I couldn't stop reading, the characters are interesting (alex is just delightfully awkward :) )the dialogue is good and it's well written with an interesting plot, well what more could you wish for ^^ so I'll definitly continue reading this and I hope the story's updated soon coz I can't wait to read it ^_^

Excellent story development. Bravo!

Damn Hussam is the sexiest one, even if he a angst whore haha! Excellent work!

Ohhhh, Great!!!

Now it leaves only Asad out of the circle!!! O.o If he joins the group ... well they could be a one hot family! lol kidding! but really this fic is getting better and better! It's really hard to wait for another update! :(

Please update soon (puppy eyes ^_^) thanks

y'KNOW the training practice scene is awesome.Also the kiss.