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God, things just got even worse for Blaine. I wish someone would befriend him so he'd feel more comfortable talking : (

Hey, I really like this--the writing style is pretty suspenseful and the material is really complicated and interesting. It could really go so many ways at this point. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the story!

Shit this story is intense, you sure as hell didn't disappoint me. Good stuff, I hope you keep it up.

Poor Blaine! Hope Bobby gets a personality makeover.

Oh no, they're going to have to send him to CEC, aren't they? Do they even have carrier centers for the 'abnormal' carriers? Both Wallace and Bobby are such jerks.

this is very good and interesting and i like how you put your own twist on the stories between 'carriers' and i cant wait to read more

Sucks about what happened, I know re-uploading a story can be a bitch sometimes. Luckily, I remember the gist of my past review.
This is a very interesting story. The fact that Blaine is slightly Autisic only makes this story more intense and emotional. Really great start, I'm totally into this. I wonder though, what kind of name is Omosupe? African, Arabic, other? Anyway, I'm going to follow this story just like I follow Kabi's stories.

One of my son's has asperger's - it is more likely Blaine wouldnt have a clue on popular culture and would have interests and learn all about those interests. He won't pick up facial cues easily - but I love Kabi's world and think you have an interesting premise.