rate_review Reviews

Will you ever update? I miss your story. I love the depth of your characters.

*puppy dog eyes* WE MISS YOU!!! Oh wherreeee are you? Do need to send out a search party?!

*looks through the phone book for the services of hot werewolves who are good at tracking lost authors*

*blinks at her recent actions before coughing innocently*

Either way, I'm still stalking you...

*dump truck full of chocolate*

NOOOOO!!! Don't give me the information early! I love to plot what comes next and be totally surprised if I'm wrong. I disagree completely with this idea that we have to give the readers everything at the beginning. That isn't really good story telling. You have to build the mystery and intrigue!

As I've mentioned before, I'm an animation major. One of the things my professors always state is that "Story is King." And while you already know the plot backwards and forwards, it should be understood to not give the audience everything at the beginning. After all, if they already know everything, why would they want to pay attention anymore?

*hands you bunches of chocolate and wonders if she will ever have the time to draw at least one stripper for you...then has an idea to draw a certain death fae stripping*

Giving it up all at once is just the cry of Fantasy fans who read the last chapter first. Fuck em. Its better this way. You really feel like your earning rights to the information as the players are fleshing out. Each new level of getting to know THEM allows the facts to be in better perspective. Besides how many people love the mystery of just who RAB was? ;) Cookies if you know what I'm talking about and shame on you if you don't.

Loved the new update! To answer your question - this is your story so do it YOUR way! You've done a great job so far. If your critics at the writer's circle are that knowledgeable why are they sitting around talking and not slavering over a desk somewhere working on their next bestseller? The drip-feed approach means that each chapter adds another piece of the puzzle and keeps the audience on their toes, avidly waiting for the next fix. Thinking of which... (hint hint)... Seriously, don't second-guess yourself, you're good and the story is compelling.

Best,

'Purr

Don't change! They have no idea what they are talking about. Crazy people! I hate stories where they just come out and tell you everything. Those stories dont allow the reader to form there own images and ideas. They take all the creative thinking out of reading(if that makes sence to you). I have read all you stories and I love your writing style. If I am having a bad day I check to see if you had a new update or reread your work and my day becomes better. Keep write like you are now and you can write the world!

Don't change!!! I love your writing style and I adore your stories. The only thing I would wish is that you updated sooner. It is hard to wait in suspence for so long, I admit. Please continue on in the same intriguing way.

So this is the part where I start screaming and daring to withhold chocolate from you again so that we can get more chapters?! PLEASE!!! I beg, I plead, I'll pay for hot male strippers to come to your house if you need inspiration...well actually I'm a student, don't have that kind of money....how about i draw some sexy naked hot strippers instead?

MORE PLEASE!!! This is a really great story so far! can't wait to read more! :)

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