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May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This definitely had an interesting start. But despite their description I can't really picture what they look like, they're just blurry in my mind. :<
I still hope to see more from it though, it has lots of potential and creativity. :)
~Katsikara
I still hope to see more from it though, it has lots of potential and creativity. :)
~Katsikara
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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting Prologue here! I like how you've started this so far!
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May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmm I liked it. and it left me extremely curious.
I love reading anthro and mpreg (I'm a sucker for a well written mpreg ^^), and I find it refreashing that you opted for a different and aparently unique kinda anthro instead of going with the usual wolf, neko or naga.
I'm guessing the mate Iendro has so eagerly been following won't be exactly what he expected, is Janrios a bearer at all? or is Iendro not as much a sire as he, and apparently everyone he knows, thinks?
please update soon, I'll be eagerly awaiting. in fact I'll be right here with Iendro and Janrios making small talk and and just generally being a nuisance! lol
I love reading anthro and mpreg (I'm a sucker for a well written mpreg ^^), and I find it refreashing that you opted for a different and aparently unique kinda anthro instead of going with the usual wolf, neko or naga.
I'm guessing the mate Iendro has so eagerly been following won't be exactly what he expected, is Janrios a bearer at all? or is Iendro not as much a sire as he, and apparently everyone he knows, thinks?
please update soon, I'll be eagerly awaiting. in fact I'll be right here with Iendro and Janrios making small talk and and just generally being a nuisance! lol
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May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great first chap! I'm already intrigued. AFF could use some new, decent writers ;) I have to admit, when I saw 'first original fic' I was ready to be disappointed, but you surprised me in a very good way. :) The letter was a great way to get information about your world across without making it seem out of place. And hopefully the setting for some fun plot twists? Hope to read more soon!