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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update please. The story is very good.
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August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This seems like a fic I'll end up checking every other minute just to see if it has been updated lol. Sadly, those are rare nowadays, so I hope you will be continuing this soon.
This seems like a promising story and instant plus for not making noticable grammar mistakes, it was enjoyable to read!
(Wants moar.)
This seems like a promising story and instant plus for not making noticable grammar mistakes, it was enjoyable to read!
(Wants moar.)
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. I can't wait to read some more Very imaginative on the creatures.
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a bad father.
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Iendro. He is so young and sweet. He really comes across as a teenager. I can see that he should not have criticized his father in front of the others. Then it became a challenge that his sire had to meet. Too bad for his dad because Iendro seems like he will be the perfect Alpha one day. He just needs so more life experience. Iendro and Janrios will make a very cute couple
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June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story made me so happy. Please keep up the good writing. I am very eager to read the next chapter. I love the way your writing flows with so many beautiful images and a touch of humor too.
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Iendro is so cute! He really is like a teen with his first crush, yeah? lol
I'm getting really curious about Janrios, he doesn't seem to be your average Qyotaul (tho I'm not really sure how your average Qyotaul should be! ^^), but then again Iendro doesn't seem to be all that average either. XD
I'll be eagerly awaiting to find out their secrets so update soon. ^^
I'm getting really curious about Janrios, he doesn't seem to be your average Qyotaul (tho I'm not really sure how your average Qyotaul should be! ^^), but then again Iendro doesn't seem to be all that average either. XD
I'll be eagerly awaiting to find out their secrets so update soon. ^^
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Iendro is so cute and confused, I just want to cuddle him :-p His internal dialogues are hilarious. Can't wait to see what 'treason' he committed.
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story. I find it very disappointing that most people who post in the fantasy section end up discontinuing or they take a long time to update. I assume this is from not getting as many reviews? So I am making sure to review! You are doing great. I like your characters, a strong but kinda naive and unconfident friendly sire and a bold bearer.