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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know, I wish there was more of this. Very well-developed characters. Dark, but still a hint of positives. Good job with with it, in any case.
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November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the beginning, and would like to read more about Andrew. It's a very interesting start, please continue.
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I'm looking forward to some more of this. Tortured souls are always interesting to read about. This is the worst case of sex abuse I've read about, though. Usually, there aren't physical scars, or they just serve to make the injured person more beautiful/intriguing. It's nice to find some true physical problems that don't have a response of "oh, neat." They cut Andrew's balls off! *shiver*
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May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was a great first chapter!! really good writing and development of your major characters. nice and long like i like 'em (no pun untended). please continue with this story i'd lover to read more ^_^
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing... I've always loved stories that have an abused main character. And so far, this story is very amazing. I like how you told his past at the end of the chapter, because it made things even more clearer and real. Keep writing, because I'll be looking forward to new chapters!
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I'm looking forward to read more =D