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for Eyes of the Serpent

by LittleBlackKitten

person Thel20
schedule June 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A very good story. I'm truly enjoying it and i can't wait for you to post more so that i can continue reading.

Cya Later:)
Thel20
person Artemias
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Done with the latest update!
I really like your story.
I'd love to see more character development with Alistair and Demitri though.
I like Corbin best so far. :)
He seems to be an interesting character; lots of inner conflict yet seemingly a decent person.
person Artemias
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Reading chapter 14 now. Pretty interesting story!
person Jenn
schedule April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused about the demon. Did Corbin make a deal with the demon on purpose, or was he forced into it because the demon was going to destroy the world? I do like the interplay between Corbin and Josie though. It'll be interesting to see if he really can change. By the way, I was wondering what is going on with Remmy? Is he still trying to find her? Update soon!
person Jenn
schedule April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just read this for the first time and I'm loving it! The twists and turns make it really interesting and I love the interplay between the different characters. I'm really looking forward to more!
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's 2013 and I just thought I'd let you know...love the story! :3
person Anon...again
schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alas this is the same Anon as before, yet I felt I just wanted to say more!

I see this story's update was your last action on AFF, which is to say the least, disappointing. I just truly love how you weaved little things together and how the characters actually developed themselves without using the typical "here's who they are, here's what they did" technique that many other authors employ.

Juuuuuuust wanted to let you know (if you're even still around), you have fans even if they don't review! You gained at the very least a +1 today and I'd most certainly love for updates!
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Came across this some time ago, just when I was thinking of heading off for the night. 22 chapters later and I'm finally going to get to head for bed. Addictive story, and very well written.
person Darkmoon
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfulnstory. The plot is getting deeper so I can't wait to read more!!!
person mommyslittlemonster
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg please keep this up I love it!!! Just stumbled upon it tonight and i have really enjoyed all that i've read so far.