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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That sounds like a very very boring life. Stay inside with no modern entertainment and all you can do is stare at walls or clean. Ugh.
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for chapter 2. I loved it. Very nice sex scenes. Keil is right. The women would discover that he was male very quickly if they started talking to him. I think Keil has a good plan. Poor Grael will be lonely again if Keil disappears. Does Grael have a family too or is he from some other tribe? I am looking forward to your next update.
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good.
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sigh leave it to me to find the hardship stories and start hoping for a happy ending before I even finish the first chapter lol. Yet I must admit I like it lol and that I'm looking forward to more ^.^
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to the next chapter. You've managed to create a believable world and characters to live in it. Keep up the good work.
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is sad...
BUT GOOD.
It's much different than what I'm used to reading,
more please?
BUT GOOD.
It's much different than what I'm used to reading,
more please?
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is great, crossdressing and marriage the only thing that would make it any better would be mpreg
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting new story. I would love to read more.
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Come on Who you kidding? You Fan girl you, you like the idea of submissive boy toy, just like all fan girls do! I do! G
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOnderful start! Please update soon.