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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i rely rely love ur story i cant wait for the next update and to c how this story unfolds :)
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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I don't see him hunting for days with that leg, what are they supposed to do for food?
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May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter. Grael,s father certainly seems to be a bastard. This probably explains why Grael enjoys such a low status in his tribe. Why was his mother so worthless? Why did Graels father not help to raise him? The story is very interesting. I wonder if Keil could help Grael to raise his status in the tribe. I can't wait to see what happens next
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I really love your story, especially how you take time in putting so much detail in tribal relaitions and the differences between the men and women of the tribe. This is truly an exceptional story, and I love how Keil is feeling conflcting emotions about enjoying the female position, I can only hope that his husband will warm up to him, and that Keil doesn't do anything stupid and get himself found out!!! Anyway... sorry for rambling, but I just cant wait for the next chapter!!!! It's really brilliant!
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch2: Amazing.
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May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow great start and I would love to read more! please update soon!!
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May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! can't wait for more!
ASOTA
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May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow.. he sure is adapting pretty quickly... I do wonder what his 'husband' really think of him
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May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Run, boy,run!!
*laughs*
Where is he going to go?
*laughs*
Where is he going to go?
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW, what a great fic! :D After "to freedom" this is the second fic that I'm reading from you and it is very interesting! ;) I just think Keil would be happier if he stays with the worrier! but next chapter with him fleeing and with worrier on his track that should be a very very exciting chapter! :D can't wait ... ^_^