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July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor Grael
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July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! i love the story! anything to do with tribes always catches my attention. sucks that I start reading and am left off with the chapter where he leaves though! I have high hopes that they'll somehow find each other again, though.
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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Keil cares! He really cares! And now he was the promise of freedom. But will he take it? Will he choose to stay? Or will something stop him from leaving? Well, somethings gotta happen. They can't stay the way they are forever, right?
Great chapter! But watch your spelling! ;)
Great chapter! But watch your spelling! ;)
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the awesome new chapter. I kind of hope Keil will take Grael with him when he runs away. Grael does not get any benefit from staying with the tribe since the people would never lift a hand to help him. Even while he was obviously so sick. It is hard to imagine that Grael does not have a single friend in that tribe. Very sad.
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
^_^ finally! I found a good new story.
I'm really enjoying the story so far and I like the characters!
I'm gladly looking forward to the next chapter :( but aw I don't want keil to leave ! Aw oh well
I'm really enjoying the story so far and I like the characters!
I'm gladly looking forward to the next chapter :( but aw I don't want keil to leave ! Aw oh well
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
man.. its sad that he still wants to leave... hope he'll change his mind
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They should just leave together and be nomadic. I mean his tribe isn't going to want him back and this tribe hates them too.
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Divanora! woot! thanks for the update on chapter five! i'm loving how this story is going and i can't wait for the next one to come up!
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So Grael is an outcast too. Even so, his clan should not treat him so coldly. I hope he and Keil will decide to go off together. They both have a lot in common. I wonder if things would be better in Keil's tribe.
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that I never reviewed this story but I'm seriously enjoing it.
Keep going :)
Keep going :)