rate_review Reviews

Really enjoying the story. I hope things get beter for both Keil & Grael. At least having Friya as his woman will maybe help Keil a bit, as well as give Friya a break from the way she seems to have been treated. Now, what's gonig on with Grael during this time, hmmm... I doubt his "tribe" was very happy with the fact that he his Keil's true gender from them, hope he is doing okay. Looking forward to next installment.

I'm probably going to be the only one to say this, and I haven't read one or 2 of the middle chaps, but I hope that Keil and Friya do fall in love and get a happy ending. They've both had such sucky lives.

I liked this chapter. Looking forward to what will happen now.

okay this chapter surprised me... didnt expect him to get married so soon nor did i thought he would actually go through with the ritual also... considering how much he thought of Grael.. but the relationship with friya was kinda warm too. Cant wait to see what happen...

I'm surprised to find that some people don't like the turn your story's taking...

Keil getting back together with Grael and riding off into the sunset, living happily ever after? Come on, folks - that would be just BOOORING!

I think you did the right thing by creating a female character who, like Keil, seems to be an outsider within the clan. I can see them becoming friends since they have a lot in common. I also think that them being mates makes the whole story more believable. I mean Keil's uncle and all the other men are still wary and question his manliness - it's only logical they "force" him to prove to them he can take a woman. We all know that his heart belongs to Grael and they may end up together one day, but until that there's gonna be some drama, baby! At least, that's what I hope...

I can only thank you for continuing this awesome story and encourage you to go on! I'm really looking forward to the next installment!

yay you're back and I like the turn you took
wonder what Grael will do if they meet again

Well I'm not happy. The chapter was great but I am mad at Keil for his stupid decisions. For one thing, Keil is already bonded to someone else. The other issue I have is that Keil seems to have a very helpless and fatalistic attitude. That seems to be the root of all his problems. Why should he accept some lame and unattractive woman - the lowest woman in the tribe- as a gift from someone who hates him? I almost see the arranged bonding as an insult or a gag gift. Why did his uncle concern himself with arranging a marriage for a nephew that he never used to acknowledge? Plus Keil's brother is the chief. Surely Keil could have gotten a better bride with his brother's help after proving himself for a while. It seems that he is so busy bemoaning his lot in life that he doesn't take the time to have any ambition for improving himself. I can deal with a little M/F but I am feeling sorry for the bride as Keil's heart already belongs to someone else.

awwww...well, at least we got chapter! I love the story, and hope you post again soon!

WTF, NOOOOOO he's suppose to run away with Grael!!!! Now he's stuck...and may even have kids!!!! GAH!!

Oh, good development. Finally, we get a woman charactor, and she seems very strong, very brave, not unlike Keil.