rate_review Reviews

Wow. The sex scene must have been hard to write. Beautifully written of course and if it was me, I'd be stuck scrapping and re-writing that part too many times before it was comprehensible. A great job, well done. ^_^ Also, thanks for the updates (was waiting for it) and I hope to read more of what will happen next.

I am really glad this story wasn't dead. My guess is you will kill her off in childbirth or shortly after.

Very nice! Wonder where Grael is though? Poor Keil needs his man haha

Sorry for not reviewing for a while, but I had to get a new account. Anyway, great chapter and het scene, but am I the only one who prefers Friya to Grael? Because I like Friya pairing more.

Also, the feeling of holding your lover is always great, not just being held. As i understand it in every type of relationship, gay or straight, the lovers often hold one another after (its not just one always holding the other) and I know a great many women who hold men to comfort or share love. It's not just the weaker partner being held that is implied in this chapter.

Still, I'd like Friya to live and get a happy ending (if not with him, then maybe someone else.) Maybe you could have their whole family be forced to leave for whatever reason and they go off to search for the wanderers, they find them and they're civilised and Keil/Grael could be happy, and Friya could find someone who truly loves her, plus more babyz with the new guy.

Anyway, happy ending for Friya a must, preferably with Keil.

Your loyal fan,

Dave.

I love Friya. Keil is showing great charactor in bonding with her. So much of that charactor is obviously due to Keil's time with Grael. The scenes with Friya show Kael developing more respect and understanding for Grael. Kael is discovering how hard it is have principles, and how easy it is to disrespect a dependent person's needs.

Please, do not let Keil abandon Friya. Especially if he has a daughter, even more so than a son, he must make sure his daughter grows up in a better society. I hope he finds Grael. It's very dangerous to try, but it could be worth it. If I were Friya, I would not want to risk my protector dying, but of course, she has no choice. And I don't think she's the type to despair, or refuse to bear any hardship she hasn't chosen for herself-- I really like this charactor, and I don't think you could have designed a more believable ally for Kael. She must be the best woman in the tribe, while he is easily the best man. Not just adversity, but wisdom, brings them together, I would describe them as comrades in arms, in a way, with their weapons being subterfuge and skill, and their armor being endurance.

Me agrada Friya, creo que se parece mucho a Keil, en lo que se refiere al rechazo de su tribu ^^
Y como le va a Gael?

Hi Divanora. I am so eager to read the next chapter. I hope you update soon

Great story! I love the complexity of the relationship built. I can't wait for the next chapter! Until next time. Love you!

I really enjoy your writing. I enjoyed this story like I had the others, even though I have to wait for it to be continued.

so sad! he doesn't get the one he truly wants, but at least he gets someone sorta nice. you should find a way to include Grael in the next chapter!