rate_review Reviews

I will absolutely LOVE to be your beta. I created this just to say it. I've been lurking and have reviewed anonymously but haven't registered yet. LOVE THIS story. So Yeah beta me up. I'll do it quickly cause I definitely want to read the end as quickly as possible. LOL.

YAY you're back! The writing is as lovely as ever and I can't wait for a Keil/ Grael reunion!

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So happy you're back! I love this story so much.

I was so happy to see a new update! I just love this story.:)

Ah it was lovely to have an update after so long ^.^ But man I can't believe it was 2 years! I mean reading the story the timeline is dead on but I guess my mind just didn't put 2 and 2 together lol. I can't even imagine how they will interact now after it having been so long since they have seen each other. Can't wait for more!

You have written such a believable and original story that I can't help but come back to it again and again to reread. I love the twists and turns. I like that you didn't take the easy route and kill off Friya simply because she's married to Keil. I think that if Keil did find Grael that Friya wouldn't stand between them or put up a fight because of her bond to Keil. Keil and Friya don't love each other and have created a comfortable life together where they have their own system of give and take; to the point that Keil is okay with teaching her how to hunt. They are breaking gender barriers and in the long run I believe that will be good for their daughter who won't be forced to marry someone she doesn't choose her self. So, I'm hoping that Keil finds the nomads safely because I think Friya will fare better in their world when Keil and Grael meet up again.

I'm excited for the next chapter because I'm curious about Grael. I suspect he ran from the tribe that 'raised' him because they would kill him for bonding to a male. I figure he's been living with wanderers for the last two years and that when Keil goes to scout for the wanderers, he'll find Grael among them. Please update soon. It's been an awfully long time and your fans are twisting and turning awaiting the next stomach fluttering chapter.

Oh, I'm really glad Freiya remains alive. She's an interesting charactor, a thoughtful one. More importantly for your story, she allows you to advance the plot through dialogue, which certainly beats interior monologues! And frankly, leaving the tribe can't be done alone (not with a dependant infant). Having a wife will also help him gain acceptance from the Wanderers. Freiya can testify to his sincerity, his true desire to live a different, more free life-- her very presence demonstrates it. I love that she will be learning to hunt! Though that could get her in trouble. Just another thing for them to worry about: will her husband return to find her in trouble?

How is this search going to lead them back to Grael? Of course I, like all your readers, feel they must reunite soon.

I really hope they will be Wanderers, and free to make new lives, somehow.

This is very well written. I like your characterization and how the world you've created within your story seems so real. I hope you add more soon and that Grael will reappear soon too!

This is such a great story!
Seriously can't wait for more, espsecially hoping for more with Grael
I miss him :(

Waiting anxiously,
Arai

Oh this story is so wonderful. I really love it!
Have you abandoned it? I really hope not. It's rare that I return several times for an unfinished fic if it's not often updated. This is the exception!