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by jesag116

person Dana
schedule December 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far but you got to fix that typo. When your talking about an alpha wolf, it completely threw me from the story to the point were I had to stop and write this.
schedule June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I miss this... just read it over and a host of questions started playing through my head. I have no idea how you were planning to continue this, if you were planning to continue this, so I'll just chalk it up as something I would look forward to reading if continued, but a pleasant memory if it isn't. I do know how it is to try to find time to write with a busy schedule...
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I miss this gem... why haven't you continued? I want to know what happens!
schedule November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
is there more....i hope there more i want more. make me happy and post up more.
schedule October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel as though you've fallen off the face of the earth with no possibility of return... I so wanted to know how this story ended... -pout-
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just...wow! I don't think I could afford the water bill for the cold shower I'd need to take after reading this! Really good story and I'm interested in seeing how it develops. I must agree with Saige and say the changing POV threw me slightly but I'm over it. It's a shame this story has over 1000 hits but hardly any reviews =( Get them fingers tappin people!! Keep up the good work =)
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo... intrigue... why do you people do this to me? leave me at cliff hangers and make me have to beg for more!!
*begs* pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease... can i have some more?
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i can tell you. i saw the name and literally squealed. yay!!! update!!! (and i haven't reviewed anything in ages... i feel soo bad.

Anyway... hot and steamy, you are going to be the reason my panties are wet right now, i like... i like a lot. you have me thinking about the hot hot steamy sex that. though it can wait for the house, most likely won't be able to wait for the room. i can imagine them losing control and simply attacking each other on the stairs.

Keep up the good work love. can't wait for more
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating!!! heheheheh can't wait to see more! XD
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
are you gonna update this story? i'm curious... cause i wanna see how it would end... please?