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June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent chapter. I don't know how she's gonna get out of the jam she's in with Slaiden but I can't wait for you to tell us! That was hot for an almost rape scene. Rape is bad and all but it was still hot!
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June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, that was a very juicy and hot chapter. Glad to finally see some action between the two lol. A little slight non con just makes things hotter, but I agree the full blown rape scenes aren't very nice to read. Please update again soon!
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooo cliffy, can't wait for another review. The story is getting even better :-D. Please update again soon!
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon :-)
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
keep it up karategirl. Your characters are well developed. I like this story very much. Can't wait for the next chapter. JP
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oo Can't wait to see where you want to take the story. Please update again soon!
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful udpates!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I must admit I have been following this story for a while now. Very interesting story I must say.
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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really nice chapter, thanks for updating quickly but don't rush because of me :-P. I'm sure the rest of the story will be just as great as what you have written so far. Please update again soon!
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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw that really stinks that it will be so long before you can update, im really looking anticipating another chapter. Please update again soon!