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All caught up... SO IN LOVE!!! I love bad guys I especially love when they don't go twilight and try and be better for their lady loves! Have you noticed your a fan of double negatives. (And affected is the word you wanted not effected a few chapters back.) Lastly....... THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for introducing me to texts from last night my new favorite phrase is to roll over in the middle of the night and tell my husband "My vag wants to play hungry hungry hippos with your cock"




ref Miriam webster www.m-w.com usage Effect and affect are often confused because of their similar spelling and pronunciation. The verb 2affect usually has to do with pretense . The more common 3affect denotes having an effect or influence . The verb effect goes beyond mere influence; it refers to actual achievement of a final result . The uncommon noun affect, which has a meaning relating to psychology, is also sometimes mistakenly used for the very common effect. In ordinary use, the noun you will want is effect

I loved this chapter. Please update again soon! Also,i'll be glad when he takes her back to where he came from :-p

one word....HOT lol

I've read up to chapter 3 And I've seen your postings in the forums for a beta reader and the pleas in the chapters... I am an early riser so I can afford to read no more this evening if your still looking find me on the forums under sightsoblind TTFN

Wow, great job on the chapter! Please update again soon!

Hi, I had some catching up to do so only one review. Your character dev is great. Can't say there's one that I don't like, well some I don't like...but I appreciate what you put into them anyway. Is she ever going to stop being the "wrong place at the wrong time girl?" Of course that would make the story a lot less interesting if they kept NOT running into each other...wouldn't make for much of a story then. DUH! Can't wait for more. Keep it comin karategirl.

Oooo :-). Please update again soon!

Ooo yey another hot scene coming up! Where is he going to take her after all the killings are done? Please update again soon!

All caught up! Wow so much has happened. The police are close they only need to find out that Jeff summoned Slaiden. This story is so good. Love it.

Really great chapter! I like that Slaiden is really intimidating and can make almost anyone uncomfortable lol. Please update again soon!