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That was excellent! Glad you took your time with it. Hmmm I know it had nothing to do with me but I do love seeing my name in stories! LOL He took it easy on her huh! That doesn't bode well for poor Harley in the future. I hope you continue this story with a new one. I can't wait for a follow up. You don't have much time left so good luck squeezing this in before you leave. JP

Awe man! A whole week. Harley has some not so pleasurable punishment coming shortly. I wonder if Slaiden will be able toi forgive her transgressions for this night or not. I have a feeling she may be walking funny for a while once he's done. LOL.

Ugh, I can't believe another cliffhanger. Please update again soon!

What do you mean if it's not up by the end of the week before you go on vacation then you'll put it up when you get back?? That's not really an acceptable option. How about you get it done before you leave...sounds like a good plan to me. I know she'll catch on soon, just waiting for the seeds planted to sprout somm roots. I think this list needs to be a little longer. I forget how many dushbags I've known in my life. How many parties where the same crap happens. I take you write from some sort of experience also. Ok i rambled in this review, sorry. I didn't even review! Ummmm nice update! LOL

AAAhhhhh!!! Cliffhanger! Wonderful update as usual. Have fun on vacation. :)

Wow! First off, welcome back!!! Oh I loved the way Slaiden played with his prey. I love Slaiden period. I can't wait til next chapter. Oh and I would definitely love to read a sequel where Harley is adjusting to her new home.

Nice update. Nice gory painful death. Man biting off my tongue is such a huge freak out thing for me. I hate even the thought of it. Ewww. I saw my friend do it when I was younger, just sends chills up my spine. That and bending my nails back!! AAAAHHHH another chill. I don't want excuses for having to wait for a friday post I want results! Not get to work. Your gotta finish this before you run out of time! Party scene is probably gonna strech a couple chapters huh?? JP

Nice chapter, please update again soon!

Aww you tease! And we gotta wait a while too. All around tease your are little lady! I do always mention Slaiden in my replys but I have neglected to mention Harley as much. I love what you have done with her, she's a strong and plausible character. Easily one of the best lead characters I have read lately. And who doesn't love a short, hot, little fireplug that can kick ass! I can't wait to see how the relationship(if you can call it that) between her and Slaiden progresses. I can't wait for these final few chapters! So excited to see where you are going with everything. Hurry hurry! The twiches are starting already and I need my fix!

Good lead in to the things to come. I love that Slaiden guy, what a great Demon! You've made him great and just how I would imagine. Hope the next chapter is coming along quickly, I can't wait for the next few closing chapters to really get everything all worked out. Hurry!