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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice :D
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August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
One problem I noticed is that, while your characters seem to live in a Detroit suburb, when talking about the colleges they're going to, they talk about State as if it's nearby. It's at least a couple hours drive to Michigan State University (referred to as "State" in Michigan). It occurs to me only as I'm writing this that you may mean Wayne State University, which is in Detroit, but I don't know of people referring to it as just "State," usually they call it "Wayne State" or sometimes "Wayne" (though I'm not from Detroit, so maybe calling it "State" is something people from the city do?).
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank heaven there is a sequel. I'm soooo curious to know what is going to happen. It would be pretty cool if Harley ended up with some crazy powers from going to the demon world. One can hope right? I can't believe I didn't even notice this story until last night. I basically read this entire thing WHILE writing a narrative for English. Still debating on posting it though. Anyway, amazing job. I really got caught in the story. I can't wait to read the second one.
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE AMAZING! Wow, I love the characters, the intensity, the plot line! I can't wait for the sequel. :) Props to ya!
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I had been checking periodically for updates. Oh so happy to see Harley unleash her rage against Jeff. I hope he gets what's coming to him. Oh Slaiden and Harley left. I can't wait for the sequel.
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say I love this story and I hope you get out from your writer's block soon!!!!
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You do good work sir, if you get a chance you should check out my works.
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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. Sorry for my lack of reviews lately. I have been horribly bad since you left. Work is very busy. I apologize for my severly unnacceptable behavior! LOL Any way, great chapter, i can see the end coming soon. I hope you've been working hard since you should be home soon for break. Hope midterms went well, sure you passed them with flying colors. I hope you get this finished on break before you go back. Can't wait for this to get completed! Keep up the fantastic work as always. You writing is superb! It gets better with each chapter.
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September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Quick review. Nice dream sequence, well done. The wait is killing me, I just want to keep reading and see what happens. JP
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's been great reading this. I'll wait patiently for your next post, as if there's any option. I like the new character you threw in there, nice idea. Also a hint to a different Gavin in the past. You pulled that last chapter together really well. It was worth the wait as will the next chapter I'm sure. Keep it coming kiddo!