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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the wolf is being pretty protective of the bunny eh.. cat wait to see what happens
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good story and getting more interesting, but (isn't there always one of those?) you really do need to stop writing 'fallow' for 'follow'... the first is a bit of untouched land, the other is the verb for 'to go after'. A little thing, but it distracts from the rest of your words. There are a few other typo's but nothing that a good beta or spellchecking wouldn't sort out. Entertaining tale and I look forward to the next posting. 'Purr
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
totally loved the new chapter! I can't wait for the next one!!
It was good to see new introductions of characters...the twin foxes are both so much alike...and are kind of dumb...but I think there cool in their own sly way...Lock and Key were good names for them too; they really are brothers fighting over small things...and Universe was an interesting fox...and an interesting name; I wonder what she and Koga are going to talk about...is she jealous over Saddle?
I do like your nick names that Koga gives Saddle...they are cute...Thumper, andd Fluffer are my favorites, but bucktooth was a good one...Saddle did try to get away, but Koga caught him...Koga acts mean and tough but really he cares about Saddles wellbeing, after all he did give him some berries, albeit with other intentions....
Apowl is an interesting character, I must say that I do like the snow owl...I wonder what he will find...
It was good to see new introductions of characters...the twin foxes are both so much alike...and are kind of dumb...but I think there cool in their own sly way...Lock and Key were good names for them too; they really are brothers fighting over small things...and Universe was an interesting fox...and an interesting name; I wonder what she and Koga are going to talk about...is she jealous over Saddle?
I do like your nick names that Koga gives Saddle...they are cute...Thumper, andd Fluffer are my favorites, but bucktooth was a good one...Saddle did try to get away, but Koga caught him...Koga acts mean and tough but really he cares about Saddles wellbeing, after all he did give him some berries, albeit with other intentions....
Apowl is an interesting character, I must say that I do like the snow owl...I wonder what he will find...
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so the mother rabbit and the owl might mate together for this mating season after they know if saddle is still alive....?
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, this is a very interesting beginning! More please!
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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this!!!!!! please give me a sequel! I need to know whats gonna happen to the poor bunny.
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May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this it's really good
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May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more please:D
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May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was hot. please have the next chapter soon
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May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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oooh, what a wondeful story!!
I do hope you continue and update soon!!
poor Saddle, such a painful way to lose his innonence. Maybe him and Koga will have another....softer....go at it again??
and will Saddle ever go back home again, I wonder...
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
can't wait!!
oooh, what a wondeful story!!
I do hope you continue and update soon!!
poor Saddle, such a painful way to lose his innonence. Maybe him and Koga will have another....softer....go at it again??
and will Saddle ever go back home again, I wonder...
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
can't wait!!