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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I already figured that Lex thought the trip had something to do w/the painting. Nice chapter; Charlie is especially comforting to Michael. They haven't known each other very long and Charlie's already saying he'll always be there for Michael? I'm curious about Charlie's story; where did he come from that night he saved Michael? What is he studying for at the school?
Anyway, I'm looking forward to their trip; hope it goes well and doesn't put Michael in a great depression.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to their trip; hope it goes well and doesn't put Michael in a great depression.
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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, this chapter had me crying! And Charlie IS a savior; he is so kind, (Zach also), to call his parents and ask them to help out a friend, who basically, he just met, what a few weeks ago? It's amazing how generous he is.
And both Charlie and Zach to be so non-judgemental about Michael and Liam. They are great kids.
And both Charlie and Zach to be so non-judgemental about Michael and Liam. They are great kids.
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May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think all the kids in that class are extremely brave. I couldn't share my deepest thoughts or horrid experiences w/anyone. The poor girl Lex, was it? Yeah, I could definitely relate to her story. But it's amazing how you, the author, picture what a painting would be based on the experience of the person, and explain it in vivid detail. I actually "saw" what was painted on Lex's easel and Michael's, so kudos to you!
Michael was definitely brave and he has gone through a lot in his young life. Really good chapter.
Michael was definitely brave and he has gone through a lot in his young life. Really good chapter.
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May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Michael; he's not starting school on a good note, huh?
So...I'm really curious: who is this "he" his family is referring to?
So...I'm really curious: who is this "he" his family is referring to?
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May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a really sad chapter. Poor Michael; life has been hard on him; learning to navigate his life in a hearing world, learning to communicate w/people w/o speaking; I can't imagine how hard that is.
He's lucky to have a loving family, a GREAT roommate and now Charlie, who seems to understand and support him.
Good song by Creed; I love Creed. I used to hear that song on the radio all the time.
He's lucky to have a loving family, a GREAT roommate and now Charlie, who seems to understand and support him.
Good song by Creed; I love Creed. I used to hear that song on the radio all the time.
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May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, this Charlie seems to good to be true! lol How sweet of him to buy the book Michael wanted! And he knows sign language; how cool is that????? You know, they have a couse in ASL at our high school. Well, not MY h.s., my kids' high school! hahah Anyway, I think that's really cool; they never had that when I was growing up.
Anyway, love the chapter; can't wait to hear (sorry, see), how the conversation goes....
Anyway, love the chapter; can't wait to hear (sorry, see), how the conversation goes....
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i honestly LOVE this story so far.
i can't wait for the next chapter <3
i can't wait for the next chapter <3
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May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter! I can't believe that they spent FOUR hours aiming each other! lol
Oh, one typo at the end: relieved is relieved, not releaved. Other than that, great chapter!
Oh, one typo at the end: relieved is relieved, not releaved. Other than that, great chapter!
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May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good third chapter! I'm glad Michael's feeling better. His parents seem so wonderful and supportive! It's such a pleasure reading a story on here where the parents actually care about their kids! lol
I can't wait to find out who saved Michael and what the letter says!
I can't wait to find out who saved Michael and what the letter says!
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May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Charlie sounds like such a nice kid! I'm really enjoying this story! Can't wait for the next installment!