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for Silent Suffering

by knowthyself89

schedule October 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This story is so sad and sweet. I love it. Xoxo Robin

person Laura
schedule September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely loved this story! I'm not normally a big fan of M/M relationships, but this was amazing. I liked it because it was realistic. That kind of trauma can happen to anyone and his friends were awesome. The way they knew how to take care of him? It was great.

schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused. I thought I read this chapter before. With Jake.
person KDeheart
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So far I like the story at chapter 2, but you messed up on the formatting which affects readability in a big way..

Using the line to separate like you did causes the screen to extend right. Forcing you to scroll to the right for every line in order to read the story, and then scroll back left in order to start then next line.

The best thing to do is just use a short line, not a line all the way across the screen.
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story, i'm still sniffling lol can't wait for the next chapter
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Stop fucking making me cry! Jesus Christ! I just went thru my last box of Kleenex!


But seriously, this was a good chapter. It was very brave of Liam's mom to come by and apologize to Michael and Michael's mom.

It seems that Michael is finally learning it's ok to move on now.
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh, your chapters are too short!!!!! But at least it made me cry again! I could always tell a good chapter if it makes me cry! :)

Michael is finding it very difficult to move on. I think since he feels so much guilt about Liams's death, it's harder for him to let go and live is own life. He must realize that Liam wouldn't want Michael to wallow in self-pity forever; he needs to move on.

Hopefully Charlie and Zach can show him how to still love Liam, but also keep his heart and mind open to others.
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Too short of a chapter! It was just getting good! Ok, to be honest, I cried the whole chapter! I was just reading another story about someone else's boyfriend who was killed and it was a little similar; very tragic, very sad.

It'll take time for Michael, but he needs to heal before he can move on.

Good chapter; hopefully the next one will be longer! :)
schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Boy, how lucky is Michael to have two guys there to support him? Especially a straight guy like Zach! Hahahah
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woah, what just happened to Michael? Was he having a flashback?

Also, one typo: franticly is really spelled frantically.