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Just came back to check if you had updated, and realised I never reviewed last time..
I like this one a lot. I'm a sucker for slave stories, but most of them end up being all about Stockholm syndrome, and the poor sod not being able to "resist the touch of his master" etc, and that's just not my kink. The fact that you've obviously put a lot of thought into the technology of this world is great as well. I'll be back again to check for updates =)

Liked the new chapter!
It shows how Alex is getting used (albeit slowly, which is good) to that weird new life of his. He really forces himself to adjust, at least for the time being.
And it's great that he's not all "omg blowjobs are surprisingly fun", especially at a time like this with the circumstances being what they are, you're making it very realistic.

I'm still curious about that new regime that took over (isn't Alex?), but I guess we'll find out in time.

Did aff.net seriously ask you to remove the review responses? WTF? I liked those. =(
Anyway, keep up the great work! ^_^x
~jea

That was a great chapter I feel so sorry for Alex, please update when you can

Great new chapter!
I love how everything technological, especially the advanced and modern stuff, comes so natural to Alex that he feels lost without, while on the other side of the spectrum there's Jacob who hardly knows what to do with the "outdated" tech he's got. XD
It's also nice to see Alex develop that "plan" of his.
I can't wait for him to learn more about Jacob; surely there's more to him than "some guy who wants a love slave", right?

Hope your classes go well!
~jea

This is fantastic! Man, I hope Alex finds a way out of his situation (although to make a good story he may have to wait a bit longer XP) I wonder if Kurt will figure out that he's not actually dead? He's definitely tech savvy enough. Must be a whole 'nother world out there after the coup, though. Looking forward to more updates!!

How have I missed this?
This is really good!
Very powerful,please continue :)

Thanks for this! You're right - right under their noses. Really glad our protagonist is s showing strategic spunk - it's starting to get very interesting. :-) What does Nimda mean?

I really love this story. I just started reading it and, wow. In so many Master/Slave fics, their interaction is simply just none believable. You don’t just succumb to being a slave and trust your “owner”, cruel sex doesn’t feel good, and you don’t fall desperately in love and forgive every little misdeed just because “the Master” is handsome. I love how Alex struggles with all of this. The future touch is also very cool. We sure need more of fics like that.

Sooo, keep up the good work so I can stop waiting for the next chapter :3

This is a wonderful story I really love it, please update soon.

I'm highly intrigued by this story and can't wait to read the rest.