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Another chapter well done, but what's happnin with flamin the dorms?! I'm having widrawal symptoms I need the next dose pretty please with a cherry on top?

I am so proud of Mark for getting so far in the company in such a short, short time! I can tell Nathan's really impressed with him; he's offered to pay for his continuing education and all! Of course the provisions are pretty hefty, but it seems like a great company and they seem to pay pretty well, so it's a great thing for Mark. Gets him out of McDoogal's. (was that the name of the place? Sorry, you think I'd know it by now!! lol)

But, forgetting all the work stuff, I can feel for Mark; I felt his pain when I was reading this. He really wanted to give Jason another chance. He didn't want Jason to give up; he wanted to wait until Jason was ready, no matter how long that took. When Jason took Mark's "problem" (of choosing Jason or Simon) away from him, Mark just crumpled up. No matter that they have been separated for awhile, hearing Jason's voice brought it all back. Hearing Jason's words, the finality of the ending of their relationship is always the hardest to accept. I wouldn't be surprised if Mark regressed and started acting like he did when he first walked out. (well, I'll know soon enough, I'll be looking over the next chapter in a bit! :))

Great chapter, as usual, I hope Simon gets over there quick!

Wow that was kinda sad. : ( I didn't expect to feel sad when Mark and Jason broke off. I don't know if I've reviewed this story yet but I really am liking it. I've been keeping up with it and it's good. I have to say I laughed out loud when I read the whole part about Nathan trying to hook Mark up with his son though, lol. Keep up the good work, I'll be watching.
Allison Moon

*jaw drops down in shock to nestle over K's toes* OMG Simon actually went to talk to Jason! he's so screwed if/when Mark finds out! Mark will hv a major freak out if he gets wind of this. *collects jaw from floor and rubs throbbing toes* I don't know if I should praise Simon for the balls to go and confront is love rival like that or pity him for the possible outcome. *sigh* and Jason... ah Jason, Jason, Jason... *sigh* I'm feeling torn about him. I feel like smacking him for his selfishness, beat the crap outta him for trying to keep Mark away from Simon (cause we all know that's what he'll try and do) and try and comfort him out of pity cause he's obviously in love with Mark (despite said selfishness) and he's just soo damn pitiful right now...
Lory I changed my mind, I'm not looking forward to it no more so quit the drama! just gimme my threesome of happily ever after hunks fucking like bunnies!!! I just can't afford to keep bawling my eyes out and spending all that money on paper hankies, u big drama queen devil!
just update soon and get on with the smutt will ya
huggles & cookies... and a paddle on the butt if u ignore my complaints ;PP

*urg* you're going for the share Mark angle aren't you? Trying to meet Mark's needs and dealing with his issues would be a full time job/committment but adding in trying to deal with Jason's as well just seems soooooooooooooo wrong. Simon doesn't need that kind of frustraition and really he'd just end up feeling like he's doing all the work to make that kind of relationship work, being the referee. I just can't see Simon being happy in that kind of situation because let's face it, Jason just isn't the type to grow up, or at least from what we've seen of him thus far.

Oh well, here's hoping for a Jason free happy ending.

Isn't Simon being a bit hypocritical, while he obviously cares about Mark and wants to look out for him, going over to Jason's and trying to get him to just give up on Mark so that he can move on to Simon seems selfish in my books (even if it's for the right reasons). I'm also thinking that Jason's also right that part of the reason Mark can't give himself to Simon is because he does still have feelings (probably fairly strong ones) for Jason. Simon can't ignore that because really would he just want to be 'rebound guy' that would be a relationship doomed to fail and if Mark thinks Simon is making decisions on his life for him who knows how he'll react. It also occurred to me that it isn't just Jason, doesn't Mark still talk to his family which he probably thinks of as his own, this is a lot to ask him to give up. I don't know how everyone else has reacted to Jason although I'm guessing most just hate him because it's easy to brush him off as a jerk but I can't really hate him, he just seems sad and broken and to be fair he hasn't always been treated that well either. At least he's trying if he were truly a bastard he wouldn't have tried to change at all and would blame Mark for everything, he's at least trying to take some responsibility. Does this mean I think that Mark and Jason should be a couple, not too sure but I do think that both of them have to work through some things (not just Jason) before either of them move on.

You know I had been jumping in and out of the story reading a chapter or two here or there and admittedly hadn't reviewed, I don't know what it was about this one but it just seem to strike a nerve, it was rather emotional. The curiosity of how this is all going to play out has me wanting more, I can't wait to see the next update :)

Simon is my hero! I love you, man. I'm really hoping that even though Jason didn't consent to Simon, that when he and Mark talk, things will have sunken in and Jason will let Mark go. Or maybe he'll talk to his therapist who will concede that Jason should let Mark go. WHATEVER HAPPENS... Mark and Simon happily ever after please. ;__; I don't think you're being predictable...? Usually I'm good at telling what is going to happen but I have no idea here. OTL Well. Except that Mark is going to be pissed as all hell when he finds out that Simon went to talk to Jared. I hope he can forgive Simon. That would be a ridiculous reason to drop Simon (and I'm sure Chandra would tell him as much, too!.. right?)

Oh geez, the anxiety is killing me! M.. more? PLEASE!

and thanks for the shout-out. Those always make me smile. :)

Hey, bite your tongue about school starting back; I'm enjoying my peace and quiet, thank you very much!!! lol

Ok, I see where Simon's coming from, but omf lord! If Mark ever gets wind of this, that Simon went to see Jason, all hell will break loose! Mark will be furious!

I do feel sorry for Jason; he is trying hard to be a better person and I believe in life that people deserve second chances. But, I do want to see Mark with Simon; I know Simon will treat him much better (he already proved that). I know five years is a long time to be in a relationship that's not working. But Jason's therapist is right; he needs more time to work on himself before he can get back with Mark. He should probably be alone for awhile, working on his issues.

And of course if Jason listens to Simon, it will make Mark's decision so much easier.

Anyway,GREAT, GREAT chapter!!!

Just started reading this and I'm really liking it. I like how Mark is taking control of his life and relationship and not letting it control him, it makes him a strong lead character in my eyes ^^

On to the next chapter!

OMG that was so freaking HOTT 0.o

They had better end up together or I'll, I'll, grr I don't know what I'd do but it won't be good! Update ASAP, this story is gettin so freakin good!!!