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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bob the Builder!!!!! I LOVED that one!!!!!
Ok, so now Mark is the one who's after Simon and Simon doesn't even realize it. Doesn't Mark realize that Simon is just giving him his space; his time to "grieve" over his lost relationship w/Jason?
Well, now that they're gonna share a bed (again), I can't wait till the next chapter; Simon won't be able to hold back for much longer! lol
Ok, so now Mark is the one who's after Simon and Simon doesn't even realize it. Doesn't Mark realize that Simon is just giving him his space; his time to "grieve" over his lost relationship w/Jason?
Well, now that they're gonna share a bed (again), I can't wait till the next chapter; Simon won't be able to hold back for much longer! lol
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(17) Mark wanted Jason to not give up on him, to fight for him, I think the question is is that because he truly does want to be with Jason or does he like being wanted. See the problem with enjoying being wanted is that Simon wants him and that doesn't seem to be enough. I would assume it isn't as something as simple as that, there are a lot of very strong feelings going on.
My gut feeling is that Simon's not going to admit to something immediately but say in a couple of days when Mark still won't leave his room, Simon's going to have to speak up. Where that will leave them at that point I have no idea but I do wonder if Mark will want to go back and talk to Jason, then what will Simon say or do. That brings up a whole other set of questions if Mark wants to go and talk to Jason will Simon want to go with him and if Mark doesn't let him will Simon still go and talk to Jason on his own. I think I'm getting a little ahead of myself :) I don't even know for sure if Simon will tell him. The dynamic between all three of them is interesting and I'm actually glad that you aren't just throwing Jason off to get to Simon and Mark together (no matter how much you may be tempted ;) it's what makes this story a bit different from others :)
Such a sad chapter, I'm looking forward the next chapter and seeing how they deal with what happened ^_^
My gut feeling is that Simon's not going to admit to something immediately but say in a couple of days when Mark still won't leave his room, Simon's going to have to speak up. Where that will leave them at that point I have no idea but I do wonder if Mark will want to go back and talk to Jason, then what will Simon say or do. That brings up a whole other set of questions if Mark wants to go and talk to Jason will Simon want to go with him and if Mark doesn't let him will Simon still go and talk to Jason on his own. I think I'm getting a little ahead of myself :) I don't even know for sure if Simon will tell him. The dynamic between all three of them is interesting and I'm actually glad that you aren't just throwing Jason off to get to Simon and Mark together (no matter how much you may be tempted ;) it's what makes this story a bit different from others :)
Such a sad chapter, I'm looking forward the next chapter and seeing how they deal with what happened ^_^
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August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, I loved the beginning of this chapter; it was very Mark. The nice bit was that he's earning the level of respect from Nathan that Simon has for him without involving Simon. Oh, and I LOVED how Nathan basically offered Simon up on a silver platter as a signing bonus. Gawd, I'd bet Simon would just laugh his rear off at that given his uncertainties about how Nathan feels about him.
Now, as to Jason breaking up with Mark. That was so sad; you could feel Mark's pain. It also made me think, "Dang, Jason's still an ass! He broke up with him over the phone. He could have waited the week and done it right." Which of course leads us to Jason having taken what Simon said into consideration and possibly having spoken w/his therapist about it, meaning he's starting to make hard decisions without thinking of himself first. And of course Mark's going to obsess over the whole thing now and really start to wonder what happened to make Jason do this before their agreed upon time to try to work things out. Of course this'll have Simon feeling a bit guilty over Mark's obsessing. Complications, etc. ensue and we get lots of angst and twists and turns that eventually lead us to JAYM2.
*sigh* I've resigned myself at this point to them sharing, and yes "sharing" as in "share and share alike." :P
Now, as to Jason breaking up with Mark. That was so sad; you could feel Mark's pain. It also made me think, "Dang, Jason's still an ass! He broke up with him over the phone. He could have waited the week and done it right." Which of course leads us to Jason having taken what Simon said into consideration and possibly having spoken w/his therapist about it, meaning he's starting to make hard decisions without thinking of himself first. And of course Mark's going to obsess over the whole thing now and really start to wonder what happened to make Jason do this before their agreed upon time to try to work things out. Of course this'll have Simon feeling a bit guilty over Mark's obsessing. Complications, etc. ensue and we get lots of angst and twists and turns that eventually lead us to JAYM2.
*sigh* I've resigned myself at this point to them sharing, and yes "sharing" as in "share and share alike." :P
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God. Jason's call made me cry. It's so sad.
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lori~! *hugs* you speak! XD
who cares to what the forces-may-be would say, I believe more people here love you than them. XD (can they read this? :X oops)
anyway, it's okay for the sarcasm *patpat*. no one's gonna like you any lesser coz you decided to whip out an easy-on-the-brains story. Even if it's not on the same scale as AC and flaming. it's still on some sort of scale~ ^___^ and other readers and myself are still enjoying it. That's all that matters yeah :)
Besides, I think, this story would give you alot to think about, and to appreciate.
Since it was never meant to be, arn't ya proud at how far it has gone? *hugs* It's that kind of feeling a mom would have as she watches her kid graduate. Then she thinks "aaawww my baby's all grown up" kinda thing XD
hahahha! sorry for the lame example *blushes*
Yeah, so never mind about ranking or whatever else. IT's awesome enough on its own~
speaking about awesomeness.
WHOA! Jason broke up with Mark?!?!?!?
THEY FREAKING BROKE UP!!!? god. wow.... I never knew... never would have thought Jason would do that...
I had this image in my head about him, this clingy, selfish, person. but this chapter really changed things.
.... wow~~~~ I think. it's definately gonna be harder on Jason than Mark.
afterall, Mark's life is looking up, and he has someone to fall back onto. But Jason. I don't think he has anyone to fall back on over on that side. I just hope he keeps his mind sane and doesn't lose his job or anything. That's be bad man. I wouldnt wish that sort of thing even for him.
I mean. Jason's a good guy y'know. he just has some issues. and he's working them out. and he can really be this great guy once he's settled all his issues and problems. and once he's thinking abit more straight and mature-like.
but... he's a good guy.
*sighs* Jason. All the best dude. Somehow, I still don't want you and MArk to be together.
Only now, I more wish for you to find another special someone who'd love you more than you had loved Mark.
All the best Jason! *salutes*
and nowwwww~~~ Simoooonn~~~ had better not just senselessly swoop in and eat the cake.
but heh. he has more brain than that yeah~
D: AAAH!!! I hope Mark get's a hold of himself soon! School's starting! no need for all this emotional trauma when you've got EXAMS on the line!!! and that contract!
But YAY! That's on solid contract he's signed for. I would sign for it too man.
Having the same problems as Mark in that area.... that sorta deal would be whooping great!
Imagine. your education is paid for. you don't have ta worry about fees or stuff like that. what more, after you graduate, you are guaranteed a job! for a few solid years! you need not worry man! just make sure you do your best and all's great~
I want a contract like that~~~ *sighs*
Aaaah well...
If life is very dark and bleak... then things can only get brighter from that point on, eh~
Laters!~
- nekoii
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"...and she thinks that I’m not ready jump back into ." ...I'm no ready TO jump back into...
who cares to what the forces-may-be would say, I believe more people here love you than them. XD (can they read this? :X oops)
anyway, it's okay for the sarcasm *patpat*. no one's gonna like you any lesser coz you decided to whip out an easy-on-the-brains story. Even if it's not on the same scale as AC and flaming. it's still on some sort of scale~ ^___^ and other readers and myself are still enjoying it. That's all that matters yeah :)
Besides, I think, this story would give you alot to think about, and to appreciate.
Since it was never meant to be, arn't ya proud at how far it has gone? *hugs* It's that kind of feeling a mom would have as she watches her kid graduate. Then she thinks "aaawww my baby's all grown up" kinda thing XD
hahahha! sorry for the lame example *blushes*
Yeah, so never mind about ranking or whatever else. IT's awesome enough on its own~
speaking about awesomeness.
WHOA! Jason broke up with Mark?!?!?!?
THEY FREAKING BROKE UP!!!? god. wow.... I never knew... never would have thought Jason would do that...
I had this image in my head about him, this clingy, selfish, person. but this chapter really changed things.
.... wow~~~~ I think. it's definately gonna be harder on Jason than Mark.
afterall, Mark's life is looking up, and he has someone to fall back onto. But Jason. I don't think he has anyone to fall back on over on that side. I just hope he keeps his mind sane and doesn't lose his job or anything. That's be bad man. I wouldnt wish that sort of thing even for him.
I mean. Jason's a good guy y'know. he just has some issues. and he's working them out. and he can really be this great guy once he's settled all his issues and problems. and once he's thinking abit more straight and mature-like.
but... he's a good guy.
*sighs* Jason. All the best dude. Somehow, I still don't want you and MArk to be together.
Only now, I more wish for you to find another special someone who'd love you more than you had loved Mark.
All the best Jason! *salutes*
and nowwwww~~~ Simoooonn~~~ had better not just senselessly swoop in and eat the cake.
but heh. he has more brain than that yeah~
D: AAAH!!! I hope Mark get's a hold of himself soon! School's starting! no need for all this emotional trauma when you've got EXAMS on the line!!! and that contract!
But YAY! That's on solid contract he's signed for. I would sign for it too man.
Having the same problems as Mark in that area.... that sorta deal would be whooping great!
Imagine. your education is paid for. you don't have ta worry about fees or stuff like that. what more, after you graduate, you are guaranteed a job! for a few solid years! you need not worry man! just make sure you do your best and all's great~
I want a contract like that~~~ *sighs*
Aaaah well...
If life is very dark and bleak... then things can only get brighter from that point on, eh~
Laters!~
- nekoii
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"...and she thinks that I’m not ready jump back into ." ...I'm no ready TO jump back into...
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the word threesome caught my eye. and it came from Khayman's review, and your response to it.
I mentioned this earlier yeah, like a few chapts earlier in my review.
since the tiltle is such. it's like "bound to be a threesome"
Marks' the main chara. thats ONE
Jason and you manes TWO
1 + 2 = 3
8D
I shall look forward for the chaps to come 8D~!!!
I mentioned this earlier yeah, like a few chapts earlier in my review.
since the tiltle is such. it's like "bound to be a threesome"
Marks' the main chara. thats ONE
Jason and you manes TWO
1 + 2 = 3
8D
I shall look forward for the chaps to come 8D~!!!
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I missed reading your answers to our comments so bad, they'r always so funny! *huggles L to death*
and u proved me wrong about Jason, well a little wrong at least, I never imagined that so soon into his therapy and after being confronted by Simon of all people (is rival!) that he'd actually hv the discerniment to make the right choice, put Mark's happiness above his own and essencially give him up. though he was still fatefull to is selfish streak by breaking up via phone call, that's a cruel way of ending a relationship. though in the other hand if he'd done it face to face with Mark he'd probably never gone through with it. matter of fact they'd probably end up in bed... or the couch... or the floor... hmmmm knowing them they'd go at it in every available surface! lol
and there will be smut-filled naughtiness in only two chappies away?! does that mean that my rabid bunnies threesome is soon to be available?! *stares eagerly at laptop's monitor trying to get a glimpse into Lori's little twisted and depraved drama queen devil mind* ;PP oh goodie I'll make sure to try and give you a tasty review once I finish drooling over the smutt... err... I mean attentively reading such fine a chapter! ;P
ok since you commented our comments ^.^ and left me with good news on the horizon here's your treat *sends L a load of digital cookies* and you'r free of the paddle... at least for now
huggles girl & update soon
ps: I'm missing the FitD's crew mighty hard, missy! try and update that too or the paddle's back ;P *caresses said paddle with an evil smile before putting it away under the chair* XD
and u proved me wrong about Jason, well a little wrong at least, I never imagined that so soon into his therapy and after being confronted by Simon of all people (is rival!) that he'd actually hv the discerniment to make the right choice, put Mark's happiness above his own and essencially give him up. though he was still fatefull to is selfish streak by breaking up via phone call, that's a cruel way of ending a relationship. though in the other hand if he'd done it face to face with Mark he'd probably never gone through with it. matter of fact they'd probably end up in bed... or the couch... or the floor... hmmmm knowing them they'd go at it in every available surface! lol
and there will be smut-filled naughtiness in only two chappies away?! does that mean that my rabid bunnies threesome is soon to be available?! *stares eagerly at laptop's monitor trying to get a glimpse into Lori's little twisted and depraved drama queen devil mind* ;PP oh goodie I'll make sure to try and give you a tasty review once I finish drooling over the smutt... err... I mean attentively reading such fine a chapter! ;P
ok since you commented our comments ^.^ and left me with good news on the horizon here's your treat *sends L a load of digital cookies* and you'r free of the paddle... at least for now
huggles girl & update soon
ps: I'm missing the FitD's crew mighty hard, missy! try and update that too or the paddle's back ;P *caresses said paddle with an evil smile before putting it away under the chair* XD
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I don't think the shout-outs are needed every chapter. It sucks you aren't allowed to respond to reviews, though! I should just email you. I like chatting with authors I'm fond of, haha. Anyways, on to more important matters......
f/kadGFVAJFHGAHRGIAJEG AURhgargj oh. my. god. You always manage to pull on my heart strings just right. *deep breathe* I'm *really* proud of Jason. All the resentment I had against him is gone now. I'm so glad he was able to make that choice and carry through with it. It was the right thing to do. The way they were talking... from someone who has been in a similar situation, it's so hard after your relationship has been like that. Months, years, however long it took before Jason was ready, the two would always have bad blood between them. Especially when Jason heard the full story of what happened with Simon (which would be inevitable, knowing Mark). To get a little TMI on you, my best friend and I dated for almost five years and had a lot of crap happen between us (worst of all, in my opinion, her cheating on me several times). We're still friends now after a period of separation, but even as friends, things are still pretty rough sometimes.
I'm so glad that Mark is getting out of McDoogle's for real. It's about time he put his talent and passion to good use! I'm so excited for him. So excited for this fictional character. I need to get a life. OTL But his interaction with Nathan and Nancy was so cute! And KFDGHGUH Nathan wanting to introduce Mark to Simon. OH GOD SO FUNNY AND SO CUTE. It's going to be so, so excellent when Nathan finds out... Pffff, it would be so funny if one of them was introducing the other to Simon as the guy they're seeing and Nathan is like HEYWAITAMINUTE or whatever. Just, oh man. OTL
*devours chocolate* Next chapter, Simon to the rescue. Will he admit to talking to Jason? How will he comfort Mark? Tune in next week to find out!
f/kadGFVAJFHGAHRGIAJEG AURhgargj oh. my. god. You always manage to pull on my heart strings just right. *deep breathe* I'm *really* proud of Jason. All the resentment I had against him is gone now. I'm so glad he was able to make that choice and carry through with it. It was the right thing to do. The way they were talking... from someone who has been in a similar situation, it's so hard after your relationship has been like that. Months, years, however long it took before Jason was ready, the two would always have bad blood between them. Especially when Jason heard the full story of what happened with Simon (which would be inevitable, knowing Mark). To get a little TMI on you, my best friend and I dated for almost five years and had a lot of crap happen between us (worst of all, in my opinion, her cheating on me several times). We're still friends now after a period of separation, but even as friends, things are still pretty rough sometimes.
I'm so glad that Mark is getting out of McDoogle's for real. It's about time he put his talent and passion to good use! I'm so excited for him. So excited for this fictional character. I need to get a life. OTL But his interaction with Nathan and Nancy was so cute! And KFDGHGUH Nathan wanting to introduce Mark to Simon. OH GOD SO FUNNY AND SO CUTE. It's going to be so, so excellent when Nathan finds out... Pffff, it would be so funny if one of them was introducing the other to Simon as the guy they're seeing and Nathan is like HEYWAITAMINUTE or whatever. Just, oh man. OTL
*devours chocolate* Next chapter, Simon to the rescue. Will he admit to talking to Jason? How will he comfort Mark? Tune in next week to find out!
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
" (Life is fun!) "
O_O whoa. if THAT is the reason why AC and flaming is taking some time, then.... ITS OKAY!! XD
Take all the time you need and have fun with life! first!
It feels so rare for me, now, for people in this world to treasure life and enjoy it... So if you're having fun with life... then, yeah. go on and have as much fun you can have~
^___^~
Anyway. this was such an emotional chapter for Jason.
It makes me feel as thou perhaps, he needs someone to take care of him. He needs someone who will blindly and unconditionally love him and him only. He needs someone to do all that for him, then coax him into becoming someone more normal and stable.
You know, Jason's a 'top' here in this story. But somehow, the type of person he is makes me feel as thou he ought to be a bottom. To be taken cared of.
My mentality of the threesome thing is quite wiped now... I wonder... will another character be popping his head into this picture? hmmmmmmmmmm~ it's something to ponder about eh~
I have a feeling that JAYMT will probably be a 'lesser chapters' story as compared to AC or flaming. but still... It's not the climatic part yet. hmmm . who knows. you're full of surprises. XD
It's been such a roller coaster ride (that's still going on) with flaming and AC. will the ride for this one be shorter? or just as long? XD
Only reading on will find that out for me XD hahahaha~
okay then! take care Lori. keep having fun with Life! :D
- nekoii
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"“It was because you." it was because OF you... yeah?
O_O whoa. if THAT is the reason why AC and flaming is taking some time, then.... ITS OKAY!! XD
Take all the time you need and have fun with life! first!
It feels so rare for me, now, for people in this world to treasure life and enjoy it... So if you're having fun with life... then, yeah. go on and have as much fun you can have~
^___^~
Anyway. this was such an emotional chapter for Jason.
It makes me feel as thou perhaps, he needs someone to take care of him. He needs someone who will blindly and unconditionally love him and him only. He needs someone to do all that for him, then coax him into becoming someone more normal and stable.
You know, Jason's a 'top' here in this story. But somehow, the type of person he is makes me feel as thou he ought to be a bottom. To be taken cared of.
My mentality of the threesome thing is quite wiped now... I wonder... will another character be popping his head into this picture? hmmmmmmmmmm~ it's something to ponder about eh~
I have a feeling that JAYMT will probably be a 'lesser chapters' story as compared to AC or flaming. but still... It's not the climatic part yet. hmmm . who knows. you're full of surprises. XD
It's been such a roller coaster ride (that's still going on) with flaming and AC. will the ride for this one be shorter? or just as long? XD
Only reading on will find that out for me XD hahahaha~
okay then! take care Lori. keep having fun with Life! :D
- nekoii
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"“It was because you." it was because OF you... yeah?
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad of me to say that Jason's out of the picture? I really didn't think their relationship was going to work out and am quite glad Jason manned up and recognized that he wouldn't be helping Mark at all by trying to bring their relationship together again. I hope Mark learns to let go of Jason and be happy with Simon because I know that in the end Simon is the better choice...
Can't wait for the next chappie! ^.~
Can't wait for the next chappie! ^.~