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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read 'Myranda Lynn's review xD and yeah!
That thought played on my mind too. the two bedroom only thing. But perhaps, you deliberately did that, so Mark and Simon would be forced to 'share' a room when Tim slept over. xD
Who knows~ but you've gotta satisfy her curiosity. After all, When you have an aspiring-architect as a main character, and when you go on and describe Simon's house (in the earlier chapters) in such detail... People just want a clearer picture in their mind.
*Shrugs shrugs*
who is at the door btw?
Jason? *A* why would be be there? who knows. I'd like a plot twist with him involved~~~ :D
- nekoii
That thought played on my mind too. the two bedroom only thing. But perhaps, you deliberately did that, so Mark and Simon would be forced to 'share' a room when Tim slept over. xD
Who knows~ but you've gotta satisfy her curiosity. After all, When you have an aspiring-architect as a main character, and when you go on and describe Simon's house (in the earlier chapters) in such detail... People just want a clearer picture in their mind.
*Shrugs shrugs*
who is at the door btw?
Jason? *A* why would be be there? who knows. I'd like a plot twist with him involved~~~ :D
- nekoii
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised Tim didn't come down, listening to all that commotion in the basement! hahaha
I wonder who's at the door? Could it be Simon's dad? Wouldn't that be awkward???
I wonder who's at the door? Could it be Simon's dad? Wouldn't that be awkward???
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hot!
Why do I get the feeling that Jasons gonna be at the door?!
Can't wait for the nxt chap :)
Why do I get the feeling that Jasons gonna be at the door?!
Can't wait for the nxt chap :)
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
After writting a lemon chapter of my own today and then reading yours, I think I need to go back and seriously rework mine.
Gawd that was good, a few revealing moments, some lighthearted teasing and definate comfort with each other. And of course the mystery folks at the front door for next time. Oh, and a half bath downstairs. ;)
Gawd that was good, a few revealing moments, some lighthearted teasing and definate comfort with each other. And of course the mystery folks at the front door for next time. Oh, and a half bath downstairs. ;)
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My god....why did I feel that it's Jason at the door?! O_O;
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, normally I wouldn't do a second post but I've been re-reading this and there are a few things about Simon's house that have been bugging me and I just had to comment on them.
The first being that there are only two bedrooms. I know it works for the story better that way but given that it has a 3-car garage, is on acreage and based on the layout you described for the ground floor it just seems like there should be at least 3 bedrooms. Although I suppose that one of the rooms could be used for something else like an office, it just doesn't feel right given the "other rooms along the hallway" that Mark missed in his initial tour. Plus, the finished basement has the workout space so that rules that use out. I guess it could simply be an "unfinished" space which would play in nicely as a work space for Mark if he were to move in.
Anyway, the other thing that's bugging me about the house is that there's no 1/2 bath on either the ground floor or in the basement. Although, again, it could simply be behind one of those doors Mark wasn't paying attention to. Ok, so I know this was a bit of a ramble but the part of me that loves architecture and interior design just had to get that off my chest.
Well, that and the fact that I'm kinda bummed that we're probably not going to get to see Mark's first "solo" job as a architect. It just seems like that would be a really important thing for him; that final proof to himself that he really did have what it took to achieve his dreams. Plus that would, I'm sure give him that final self-confidence boost to try to reconcile with his parents, if Simon hadn't already coaxed him into trying it before then.
The first being that there are only two bedrooms. I know it works for the story better that way but given that it has a 3-car garage, is on acreage and based on the layout you described for the ground floor it just seems like there should be at least 3 bedrooms. Although I suppose that one of the rooms could be used for something else like an office, it just doesn't feel right given the "other rooms along the hallway" that Mark missed in his initial tour. Plus, the finished basement has the workout space so that rules that use out. I guess it could simply be an "unfinished" space which would play in nicely as a work space for Mark if he were to move in.
Anyway, the other thing that's bugging me about the house is that there's no 1/2 bath on either the ground floor or in the basement. Although, again, it could simply be behind one of those doors Mark wasn't paying attention to. Ok, so I know this was a bit of a ramble but the part of me that loves architecture and interior design just had to get that off my chest.
Well, that and the fact that I'm kinda bummed that we're probably not going to get to see Mark's first "solo" job as a architect. It just seems like that would be a really important thing for him; that final proof to himself that he really did have what it took to achieve his dreams. Plus that would, I'm sure give him that final self-confidence boost to try to reconcile with his parents, if Simon hadn't already coaxed him into trying it before then.
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so smexy sweet, and poor Simon, now I'm sure he's the one really starting to reevaluate things. I love that Mark's thinking of essentially using Simon as a human sheild with Nathan. My only real comment is that this seems like a good Jason poping back up point; I just don't think that we'd be seeing the last of him just yet with his messed up logic and all that.
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August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
heavy on the introspection~~~ eh~~~
well that's good yeah? now at least, we know the INNER thoughts and on-goings of the confusing minds of Mark and Simon (I nearly wanted to say Mark and Anthony... those two names go well together eh.)
deep inside... Mark is such a.... beast? I can see him being the top in a relationship. but. only when's he's tipsy, or drunk. XD
and when Mark get's like that, Simon becomes... a nervous wreck? XDDD
okay~ looking forward to more development of the plot~
and perhaps, an introspection on Jason's mind ... OwO~~~
-nekoii
ps: this review is shorter than usual... eh.
I'm real busy this week, and next week, and the 1st two weeks of september too... @_@ (but apparently not busy enough, since I still managed to squirm in a read XD )
gottachao! laters! :D
well that's good yeah? now at least, we know the INNER thoughts and on-goings of the confusing minds of Mark and Simon (I nearly wanted to say Mark and Anthony... those two names go well together eh.)
deep inside... Mark is such a.... beast? I can see him being the top in a relationship. but. only when's he's tipsy, or drunk. XD
and when Mark get's like that, Simon becomes... a nervous wreck? XDDD
okay~ looking forward to more development of the plot~
and perhaps, an introspection on Jason's mind ... OwO~~~
-nekoii
ps: this review is shorter than usual... eh.
I'm real busy this week, and next week, and the 1st two weeks of september too... @_@ (but apparently not busy enough, since I still managed to squirm in a read XD )
gottachao! laters! :D
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August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey girl!
too tired 4 big review so... loved it as usual, it was a hot 'little' chapter. specially liked Simon's little dumb moment at the end, so cute.
off to bed now *big yawn* update soon
huggles L
too tired 4 big review so... loved it as usual, it was a hot 'little' chapter. specially liked Simon's little dumb moment at the end, so cute.
off to bed now *big yawn* update soon
huggles L
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a chapter full of hotness!!!!! Wow, that's all I can say is wow!
Well, I can say one more thing: I can't believe Jason, after five years together, after being monogamous for five years, Jason STILL has Mark use condoms????? I was really surprised at that! Thank God for Simon, believing in Mark; I think that alone may have sealed the deal, so to speak.
Anyway, awesome hotness chapter! lol Can't wait for the next one! Can't wait to find out what Simon's dad thinks of Mark's new artwork! hahah
Well, I can say one more thing: I can't believe Jason, after five years together, after being monogamous for five years, Jason STILL has Mark use condoms????? I was really surprised at that! Thank God for Simon, believing in Mark; I think that alone may have sealed the deal, so to speak.
Anyway, awesome hotness chapter! lol Can't wait for the next one! Can't wait to find out what Simon's dad thinks of Mark's new artwork! hahah