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oh wow, this is getting more and more interesting. such conflicting emotions. I want Mark to be happy with Jason, but I'm not sure that I want him to be with Jason either. he's right, Jason should get professional help.
then again, what kind of story would this be if those two were just happy throughout the entire story??
poor jason, i feel bad for him. if they do end up breaking up, I at least hope that Jason finds someone he can love too.......
can't wait for what you have in store for us readers!!!
looking forward to it already!

You know what...

Jason is actually, not a bad guy... he just has some issues...
Everyone deals with bad experiences differently... and I guess, his ex cheating on him, made him the possessive paranoid person he is now.
Mark as well, is too young to be understanding enough. I just hope, the talk that they're going to have, will be of a good outcome.
I would like it, if things worked out. Well. between them two.

Now that's out of the way. Let's hear to my predictions yeah? XD
I love doing this. your stories just give so much opportunity to do that.
Anyway, here's what I'm assuming.

The title, says "Jason and You Makes Two"
Somehow.... progressively... I think the story will lead to a point whereby Mark is torn between Simon and Jason.
and, I don't know... Maybe those two doms would share? Thou that's a bit of a far-fetched idea for now.
But hmmmmm~
hmmmmmmmmmmm~
Somehow, I see more than a simple battle between Jason and Simon to win Mark's affection.
Just can't place a finger on it yet.

Okay! Maybe more secrets will be revealed in the next chapter!

And Lori,
I really wonder how you manage to juggle three stories (which are updated rather regularly) in one go.
*applauds* Great job you have going on there ;)
Here, have a cookie *gives you a cookie* Hehe ^______^~


- nekoii

A promising beginning. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I feel bad for Jason, it must be hard for him to trust after what his ex did. If he loves Mark so much, he would get over it though, and work on his issues.

update soon, please!

I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Its already good and can't wait to see more. ;)

Pester! Love love love it! Mark and Jason are so adorable in this scene together. I can so totally see why Mark fell for Jason, and i don't just mean the hot face and rocking bod. You just gotta love a man that knows how to have fun and dislikes those that have hurt you. Yes, he's over-protective and a bit controlling, but getting to see a bit of why makes him seem like this wounded little boy inside who just doesn't want to be hurt again. I completely get why Mark feels he might have to move on and also why he wants to stay. Oh the conflict! The drama! Even the, dare-I-say, ANGST!! LOL. Off to read. Yay!

My fave author is not leaving me with just Flaming in the dorms ending soon but writing another brilliant piece. Have I ever told you i absolutley LOVE your work. It is soo cool, please please carry on writing and updating because I would be very very sad if you didn't.

Loads and loads and loads of hugginses for you

Aduial

More please please please please please please please please I beg you. *falls to knees and kisses feet* AWESOMENESS INCORPERATED!!!

Huggins Aduial

Yeah, even tho Jason sounds gorgeous physically, mentally, he's too controlling and possessive. He's too verbally abusive and Mark can definitely do better. Simon seems pretty cool. I don't look forward to the confrontation tho, either between Mark and Jason (if and when Mark ends things) or between Jason and Simon (if Jason finds out about him).

Great chapter; can't wait for the next one!

Well now, this could prove interesting. I can definately see quite a few directions this could go in, all of which could definately provide some fireworks...*snickers* in more way than one. I really do enjoy your characters and your ability to use their environment/situation to it's...uh, well just say fullest, but I have to wonder just how much you can really do with the whole "McDoogles" situation, especially since your lead is already on slightly shaky ground.

Anyway, I hope you continue with this though, it'd be interesting to see where you would take this.

This is cute I like it. Can't wait for more.