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for Jason and You Makes Two

by pesterme2

person Nodoz
schedule May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've probably said it before, and I'll say it again, I freaking love this one. I could ramble up some hundred words about why, but I'm not up to it at 00:20. I have to go up in almost 5½ hours. I want to read Aurora's Consort before bed. I make no sense since I'm really tired and ready for bed. I want to read, but I'll probably just go and die a few hours then resurrect at the nearest spawning point, aka my room. Yes, I've been gaming the whole week and I'm not ashamed to admit it. Long live the evil King or whatever. This nonsense would make more sense if I were drunk...
schedule May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Boy oh boy, Simon is smooth! Getting Mark's cell number so sneakily (is that even a word?). lol

Great chapter; can't wait for you to post the others! hhahaha

Hope you're having a GREAT Mom's Day!!!!
schedule May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Character development is on point, can't for more.
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this one. *grins* ^__^
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's weird; I thought you posted this chapter already! My bad! Yeah, Jason is way too controlling and possessive; Mark needs to be with someone like Simon. Altho...we don't really know much about Simon, but so far he seems like he'd treat Mark better than Jason treats him.

I have a feeling when they start talking, Mark is not gonna want to see Simon leave. lol Simon's just too nice to him.
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was... more or less very much like the grilled chicken, plain, that Simon ordered.
uhm. get it?

but somehow... I feel you've got a few tricks up your sleeve...
this story was, a plot bunny, you said, if i remember correctly.
I don't know about you, but for me. my Plot bunnies are usually just this scene and that scene itching to be written down, but not a truly completed plot in my head.

I wonder what's "plot bunnies" for you.
but well.

after reading and following Flaming and AC. the simplicity of JNYM2 is rather fishy...

OUT WITH THE SECRETS!!!!

HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA!

okay~~~

please add me the the mailing list for JAYM2 as well, ontop of Flaming and AC. my e-mail is nekoihiwatari at hotmale (hehehe) dot com

Laters ;)


btw, Chandra is also an indian name. Didja know? *A*
person Jetfire
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY *do a little dance, make a little love boogie* Damn Mark for having a bad conciensce, he needs to break up with the jerk and take the HOT guy. YESSSSSSSS he does. (that was a bit snake like)

More please please please

Huggins Aduial
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. And I like how fast you update. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute story so far!
person Jasmine
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story line seems to be developing nicely. It gone into detail of Jasons possesive tendences and the daily explosions of anger that Mark puts up with. I would love to see how the stranger from the first chapter comes into this and how he and Mark develop a relationship.
Hope to see an update soon.