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for Jason and You Makes Two

by pesterme2

schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was educational of sorts. I just hope, that Mark doesn't ignore the alarm bells that goes off in his head.

and I really wonder, if Jason would actually do something that he would later regret.

All in all, it does not look like Mark's gonna jump ship anytime soon. and it also doesn't look like Simon's gonna just give up.
and with Jason still in the grey of Mark's new friend... wheeeeeeeeeeee~ we have something spicy to look forward to when he finally finds out about Simon. XD

Wokay! I hope his promotion doesn't get affected! Stupid JAson, making things tough for no reason.... *glares*

- nekoii
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh boy! I gotta say Simon's words got even my alarm bells ringing loud and clear. =8
I sure hope things won't go that road, I would so prefer this to go the three way romance like I mentioned to u earlier...
oh well you'r the boss so I'll just hv to cope whith what comes... please just don't make me cry too hard!
I'm still waiting for reimbursement for all the paper hankies I had to use while reading AC missy!! ;P
person Jetfire
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow next chapter so fast. Thank you *runs and hugs* Poor Mark's a bit blind. Can't wait for the next one.

Huggins
Aduial
person lucmaria
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hai....new reader here. i enjoy your fic very much.
the problem of your fic is it to short...but i really hope u can updated fast.
the line story so far is light but interesting.

i mean jason is very possesive guy but it still not go to bad situation....they need to talk together fast to solve the problem.

and simon still didn't show that he have more good quality than jason. he seem want to snacth mark away from jason despite mark have problem with jason or not.....is not very nice to try ruin other realtionship.

but i hope u not fall to clasic fic plot.....and can suprise me and others readers with interesting and suprising plot.

and i defenitely want u to give me notice email when u updated.....luctsubasa@yahoo.co.id
hope see u updated fast
thanks for sharing with us.....
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seems like Simon is making Mark realize that Jason actually hurt him one day. Mark is in denial about Jason b/c he just wants everything to work out. It's good that he took Simon's address, just in case.
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Simon- Mark needs to get out of the relationship. They've been together for 5 years, and Jason's not gonna change. And things seem to be coming to a head with their discussion about their relationship looming. Ooh, can't wait for more- update again soon!
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please please please update soon! i want more story!
ASOTA
person Jetfire
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*gives Jason a good kick up his arse* Stupid idiot, Mark needs to get rid of him and fast. Why he doesn't I have no idea. He should have Simon....yeah much better. So kick Jason out.

All sign the petition

Huggles
Aduial
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really don't like Jason! He's such a controlling prick! At least he's not abusive, now THAT'S his only redeeming quality lol.
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've never seen such denial in my life!!! I hope Simon and Mark hook up.