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for Jason and You Makes Two

by pesterme2

person Anon
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading this. I like poor Mark, what do you do when you love someone who's too possessive and clingy and has self-esteem issues? Especially when there's another hunky guy just waiting around to snap you up? :P
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm

let's see...

Hot

HOTHOTHOT! XD

but not very clever. Mark really should talk things out with Jason.

oh well, who cares really? it was hot! lol

huggles & cookies L.

update soon
person PaxNodoz
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me Mark's relationship is going to end bad. Let's hope it won't be as bad as I think it will be, because then Simon would be right warning him.

Look! I've finally gotten an account! My birthday was yesterday, so now I'm officially an adult. Yay!
person Jetfire
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter but, bit too much loving going on between those two. They really really really need to split up. I really hope we get the next chapter soon and with some breaking up going on *nods seriously*.

Hugs Aduial
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pffffffffftttt!!! to the talk!

I was surprised, but pleased, that we finally get to see some smut action between these two! :D

so yeah, other than that, I have nothing much to say. (D:)

Catch ya laters!'

- nekoii
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would like to get on the update list you have, because this is GOOD!
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
See Jason can be good for him too. I still don't know who I'm rooting for. I'll just have to keep reading.
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, so much for talking!!! hahaha I also think they'll be too exhausted to talk in the A.M.! But, what a way to go! lol

Great chapter; can't wait for the next one!!!! (altho I already know what's coming!)
person sst
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting-Looking forward to seeing what happens when Mark comes home!
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that last paragraph doesn't make me feel like the conversation with jason is going to go so well... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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