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Aww, I feel so bad for Mark. You're doing a really good job with showing his struggle to make the right decisions. Loving it and waiting eagerly for the next chapt!

oh man, I can't believe how fast the situation degraded... one moment screwing like bunnies in heat and in the other going at each others throats.
I'm honestly surprised that Mark was actually the one to hit Jason first, but then again sometimes our bodies react before we can think, specially if we feel threatened.
I'd really hoped things wouldn't come to this, what a shame.
let's see how things play out from here.
update soon

Wow! That was some fight they had! Jason really has the temper. Must be from all his insecurities and being so jealous.

Poor Mark has no home, no money; hopefully Chandra will take his poor ass in!

I'm reviewing!! I'm reviewing!!! *trips over her own feet and falls*

OKAY! *jumps up* i'm fine!

I'm...... NOT FINE! WHAT THE HELL!
JASON TURNS VIOLENT?! oh my god. it happened. i thought it would not happen. I really thought it would NOT happen.
I thought Jason would just be that possessive bastard and jealous and suspicious and bitchy and all. but..
HE TURNED VIOLENT! and in a split second! he turned very violent! and threatening to become WORSE! in a second!
OH MY GOD!!!

yes. somewhat. it is Mark's fault... but... OH MY GOD! jAson! KNOW YOUR STRENGTH!
a punch from mark is like a book-slap. a punch from you, jason, is like a brick in the face. some what.

what.

what. oh god. my brain is stuttering.

*sighs*

well... Good bye Jason. and...... hello Simon?

And i think. Good bye promotion too. oh god... *head wall*

okay.

Good luck with life. are your kids giving ya trouble.
I was just picturing...
kid: Mom what are you writing?
Lori: oh, it's **** my dear.
kid: *thinking* What is ****?

oh NO!!! the minds of the innocent. XD Sorry Lori! I was just... *cough* uhm... sorry. very sorry.

Thank you :D
Wow! I didn't really see THAT coming... or, part of it. But.... just wow. You know you made a small cliffhanger there? I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
The last few days has been like hell to me, so this is almost the best thing that has happened during those few days. Oh, and my boyfriend declaring his undying love for me. He's a real romantic :) Well, now I'm off finding something else life-distracting to do. I'll be waiting for updates on any of your stories! (Have I said that you're awesome lately? You are)

I won't lie I'm a bad reader because I wouldn't read the sex chapter (even though we all know I am a glutton for the smut(ton)) because I realized I really really didn't like Jason with Mark and this chapter only confirmed my suspicions that he was a loose cannon ready to fire. I can't wait for the update!

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! *running hug!* YESSSSSSSSSS at last! Whooohooo Mark has left The Asshole (yes he has a big capital THE infront of it) Seriously, at last and nobody really got hurt (Jason doesn't count). Now lets get him into bed with sexy Simon.

Loads and loads of flowers for your brilliance

Aduial

Should have kicked him harder in the balls, unmanned him for good...

wow!! i can't believe that jason turned so violent!!!...........actually, I can. He shows all signs of domestic violence :(
but man, what is Mark gonna do now? I wonder if Simon will find out soon......
and what's gonna happen to that jerk jason!! erk, I hate him >:(
update soon please! This story is getting better and better!! can't wait to read more!!!

huh...i just want to smack jason right now.....
is getting like abusive with words first...and hit later....hmmm defenitly not healthy relationship and his is cheating on mark too....
well i agree that mark leave jason now...but if they still can sit and talk about their relationship and try repair it is good too...i mean is not good a relationship just over just like that without strugle or anything...but i bet jason not going to free mark ....
ok pesterme2 i have complain.....your fic to short.......please make it more long is just like when i am begin getting excited when read your fic its end so fast....hic.....make it more long kay......pleaaaaasssseeeee.....