rate_review Reviews

Hey Lori! ^_^

I keep forgetting Mark has long-ish hair.
And I'm so glad public transport is very convenient where I live. Getting from pt-job to pt-job is rather easy. and cheaper (than a car) :D and eco-friendlier :D :D :D

I get the feeling Wyatt construction... is somehow linked with Simon.
Maybe he's the secretary of that company, then Mark's gonna be his assistant. Or maybe Simon is a construction worker. Or the owner's son. I don't know. He's gonna be in there somewhere On thing's for sure, I know Mark's gonna nail this job. And perhaps, it will become his full time job too. After all, over at MacD, his reppore with his co-workers ain't good. It's damn stiffing to be working somewhere you can't feel at ease. suffocaaatttiiinnnggg.

All the best Mark! *so excited* job interviews are so exciting and nerve wrecking @_@

anyway, I thought I'd just say this...
A few years back, I personally met a few 'Kevin's that were good-for-nothing-male-chauvinists-parasites. Then this year, I got to know of a few other Kevin's (not known personally), that were generally very nice and kind hearted people (With weird habits).
I wonder.... under which category is your Kevin going to fall under.... hmmmmmmmmmm~~~

O-KAY! I'll see you in AC's review ;)

- nekoii

oh no! poor Mark is going into sex withdrawal soon if he doesn't get some, that can be potentially life threatening! quick call Simon!!! XD
I hope Mark gets lucky with this job enterview, the poor boy sure needs it. come on L don't keep beeing mean to the guy! lol
update soon

is it Simon owning the company? It is, isn't it? :D Can't wait until the next chapter

I'm finally on summer break! That should mean work, but I didn't get one. Well, no matter, I've been saving up some money so I'll manage until school starts again at least. I've got more time to write on something of my own. I'm just having a bit of trouble with it and expressing myself in English.
So, AC update tomorrow? Yay! Expect to see a review from me sometime after you've posted it.

Much better....no getting back together with Jason now. The evil bastard. Am patiently waiting for more...I seem to be doing a lot of that lately, waiting. Ah well

Huggins
Aduial

OMG, wouldn't it be a hoot if Wyatt Const. Co. was Simon's??? And speaking of Simon, where did that boy go? He disappears for three weeks also? Hmmmmm....

Can't wait to see if it's him Jason is gonna interview with.....(of course I know, but it's fun for the readers to guess)

Awww I don't know if i want them to work it out. I'm confused with my emotions right now. Thanks for the update I love the story.

oh gosh that left me all teary eyed *sniff sniff*
but Mark made the right decision in forcing this distance between them, if he remained too close, even if just through calls, Jason's therapy would end up going nowhere and Jason would soon be falling on his old habits and insecurities.
I just hope everything turns out for the better.
update soon.

Don't they know, that even though they broke up, constantly speaking to each other and bringing up their problems, just makes it worse. Then they miss each other more, they can only remember the good times, not the bad times. They're torturing themselves.

They need a clean break, at least for awhile to let the wounds heal a little.(I know, easier said than done. It's hard to break away. It takes a lot of strength and courage.)

Anyway, great angst-ridden chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Oooohh my gooood... *grips hair*

WHAT A SOB FEST.

I did NOT know you could actually TYPE that sort of thing...
they were on the PHONE the WHOLE CHAPTER.
Both of them, practically SOBBING over the receiver. the poor phone's all soggy now. *drip drip*

and yeah. I know. it's emotional, and all.
But somehow, the way this chapter was written...
I feel as thou too much talking and explanation was going on.
So I didn't really FEEL the sadness in the whole thing. (Or maybe I'm just being hissy coz I don't like Jason much.)
Or maybe I'm just cranky coz everyone's crying!!!

Gah. Do you know, this lost and frustrated feeling you get, when someone is crying, and you don't know what the hell to do!
Yeah.... something like that sorta feeling.
I just like want to shake the person and "STOP CRYING!! FOR GAWDS SAKE PLEASE!!!"

I'm going insane. O_O
I better leave quickly.


- nekoii

I still love this but it isnt as satisfying as flaming I must say. Aw well still awesome though

Hugs Aduial